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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow amazing what a great chappie thourally enjoyed cant wait to see what happens next
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really like your writing style. 8DDD
*in awe*
The story is great. I absolutely love it. Chris is my favourite character, by far. He's such a little smart ass and I love that. *hearts him* And Joshua sounds so sexy. XD Despite his mood changes. Reading Chistopher's reaactions to his moods can be so hilarious. His whole view on life seems...jaded? Is that the right word. I'm not sure, but I like reading what he thinks. XDDDD
This is the first original story I've ever read and I'm hooked. I want to know what happens next! That cliffhanger was positively evil. *pokes you* :P When is the next chapter going to be up? *runs around in anticipation*
*in awe*
The story is great. I absolutely love it. Chris is my favourite character, by far. He's such a little smart ass and I love that. *hearts him* And Joshua sounds so sexy. XD Despite his mood changes. Reading Chistopher's reaactions to his moods can be so hilarious. His whole view on life seems...jaded? Is that the right word. I'm not sure, but I like reading what he thinks. XDDDD
This is the first original story I've ever read and I'm hooked. I want to know what happens next! That cliffhanger was positively evil. *pokes you* :P When is the next chapter going to be up? *runs around in anticipation*
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good job! cant wait to read the next chapter ^^
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MEIN GOTT! this is brilliant....you can't just leave it hanging *freaks out* WAAAAAAAAAAH! update soon! *tries to bribe you with something but fails*
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated.
This newest chapter got me a bit nervous. Damn you and your cliffhangers!
By the looks of things, Chris ain't doing too well. (*A*)
Still... Good chapter. You definitely know how to write stuff with suspense and scary old men thrown into the mix.
This newest chapter got me a bit nervous. Damn you and your cliffhangers!
By the looks of things, Chris ain't doing too well. (*A*)
Still... Good chapter. You definitely know how to write stuff with suspense and scary old men thrown into the mix.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! TALK ABOUT A CLIFFHANGER! Oh man, I don't like the sound of this. This guy seems like a real sick fuck, but I wonder if Josh will save the day. :B Update soon! :P
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very very vexed that it took you so long to update! However, since I fairly liked this chapter, I'm willing to give you another chance to UPDATE! Damn it woman, you kept me hanging on for so long, only to give a few bits of laughs, and now real action, or Joshua taking Chris to a whole new level or torcher?! I wanted to cry! Honestly, i need my sadistic fix, and you have been the best supply for it being hot and steamy, ao please, please, don't make me beg you again to update soon!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! So glad to see an update, I was worried you weren't going to continue for awhile there! Looks like I was wrong, thank fuck. I really love this story, it would have just been plain tragic if it never got finished.
Anyway, even though it took awhile, this chapter was great. Loved the length of it and I'd have to say that this is probably my favourite chapter so far. Josh being a jerk, Chris being his usual amusing self and smexy tension. *drool* Plus I have the hots for mission type settings. XD Evil cliff hanger though! Hope your next update won't take as long or else I just might die from curiosity. And no one wants that, right? Right.
Oh and that guy that wants to butt rape Chris - I forget his name...Derv-Dohr...eh, I'll just call him Douche-bag. ^-^ He better keep his pudgy paws off our poor boy. Ugh! No touchies, only Josh can molest Chris...and maybe a couple of the other guys like Matt...*grin*
Heehee, well keep up the great work and look forward to whatever happens next! O_O
Until next time...Bai. >;D
Anyway, even though it took awhile, this chapter was great. Loved the length of it and I'd have to say that this is probably my favourite chapter so far. Josh being a jerk, Chris being his usual amusing self and smexy tension. *drool* Plus I have the hots for mission type settings. XD Evil cliff hanger though! Hope your next update won't take as long or else I just might die from curiosity. And no one wants that, right? Right.
Oh and that guy that wants to butt rape Chris - I forget his name...Derv-Dohr...eh, I'll just call him Douche-bag. ^-^ He better keep his pudgy paws off our poor boy. Ugh! No touchies, only Josh can molest Chris...and maybe a couple of the other guys like Matt...*grin*
Heehee, well keep up the great work and look forward to whatever happens next! O_O
Until next time...Bai. >;D
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This actually has one of the best plots I have seen on this site. I got pretty wrapped up in reading this and lost track of time. I can't wait for the rest.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well thank you SO much for that update, and yes I feel like lynching you, but since it was such a fantastic chapter I will kiss you instead. Well, I WOULD kiss you if I could. However...that cliffhanger was just plain mean. You'd better be snappy with the update or I may just cry and lock myself in my room until you put the next chapter up.