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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god. His anal virginity is still intact. You know, he did a lot better than I would have in that situation. I probably would have blabbed and then gotten myself raped and killed...or killed and raped. Who knows what order it would have been done in.
Wait...What?! Christ! Joshua is such an asshole! How could he just do that to the kid. He actually had the nerve to get him all hot and bothered with the best kiss ever and some hip thrusty action only to leave him with a simple 'Pathetic.' That is just not cool. I'm going to let myself believe that Pathetic was in reference to himself for messing around with someone so young.
You know..I'm dying to know who witnessed Christopher's desperation. I wonder if Joshua saw him. What if he really didn't leave and maybe went back to apologize in his own way and saw that.. And yeah I don't know.
I'd draw fanart like that other person...but I can never remember exactly what everyone looks like. 9_9; But yeah..Wonderful story! Despite the end of this most recent chapter. :P I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Wait...What?! Christ! Joshua is such an asshole! How could he just do that to the kid. He actually had the nerve to get him all hot and bothered with the best kiss ever and some hip thrusty action only to leave him with a simple 'Pathetic.' That is just not cool. I'm going to let myself believe that Pathetic was in reference to himself for messing around with someone so young.
You know..I'm dying to know who witnessed Christopher's desperation. I wonder if Joshua saw him. What if he really didn't leave and maybe went back to apologize in his own way and saw that.. And yeah I don't know.
I'd draw fanart like that other person...but I can never remember exactly what everyone looks like. 9_9; But yeah..Wonderful story! Despite the end of this most recent chapter. :P I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah an update....dancing around...lalallala
but next time six months...you´re kidding right???? you don´t want to see me angry ! ;)
I snogged a piranha. hahahah but it´s not an excuse it´s the truth ( piranha = Joshua ;)
Like always waiting for more :) much more!
but next time six months...you´re kidding right???? you don´t want to see me angry ! ;)
I snogged a piranha. hahahah but it´s not an excuse it´s the truth ( piranha = Joshua ;)
Like always waiting for more :) much more!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well why in the hell can't you just have them fall into bed?! You had them falling into walls! *Is still gaging over the mushy stuff that stole her happy angsty high* You know I could have done with all the visuals. I was happily petting Joshy-boy, and snuggling my compy before I read your answer to my review. I'll just tell you now, if you even put one part of those sceneraioes , please ignore my bad spelling,in the story I will promptly stop talking to you all together. And I know that you won't won't because I'm one of your few reviewers that really like your sedistic side. As for the sex scenes.........well, I think that you answered your own questiong with this last chapter. It will be hot, it will be angsty, and I will love every moment of it. hough it sucks that you are whim to your schools demands, I am equally whim to my job's demands, and so will not be able to check for updates like a I normally do. However, that does not mean that I won't keep looking for one, and bug you to give me more when I can. Just fair warning. I want it, and will do whatever I have to in order to get it. Untilnext time, ja-ne.
P.S. I think I know who was watching at the door. But I won't tell.......too many......*crosses fingers*........I promise!
~~NRF
P.S. I think I know who was watching at the door. But I won't tell.......too many......*crosses fingers*........I promise!
~~NRF
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!
Can Josh be any more of an asshole!
Jesuz, I could just smash his face into the nearest wall. One of rough and uneven bricks preferably.
Well, I probably couldn't, But I could damn well try.
Pooor Chris, jeeez he really didn't deserve that, all that shit :(
I love the way you bring out the contrast between the British and the American. Heh, lol around 'bugger'.
I actually like that word, it's funny. Though not as funny as 'boink'. That has to be the stupidest way to describe a fnucking.
I can really see why you're a graphic design student, your writing is so, vivid. (Was gonna say graphic, but that's just overstating the obvious)
Oh and lol @ “I snogged a piranha.”
That had me laughing to no end.
Loved this chapter, loved hating Josh. ^___^
Can Josh be any more of an asshole!
Jesuz, I could just smash his face into the nearest wall. One of rough and uneven bricks preferably.
Well, I probably couldn't, But I could damn well try.
Pooor Chris, jeeez he really didn't deserve that, all that shit :(
I love the way you bring out the contrast between the British and the American. Heh, lol around 'bugger'.
I actually like that word, it's funny. Though not as funny as 'boink'. That has to be the stupidest way to describe a fnucking.
I can really see why you're a graphic design student, your writing is so, vivid. (Was gonna say graphic, but that's just overstating the obvious)
Oh and lol @ “I snogged a piranha.”
That had me laughing to no end.
Loved this chapter, loved hating Josh. ^___^
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"This new Joshua made me feel like Sailormoon. And he was the uber-hot villain in the dashing cape that was hitting on me."
oh god this got me cracking up so hard pwahaha lols keep up the good work
oh god this got me cracking up so hard pwahaha lols keep up the good work
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"i snogged a piranah" lol, nice way to end the chapter becasue WOW. bit intense, no scrap that, VERY intense.
i can never tell if i like joshua. sometimes hes such an arse and sometimes hes down right scary and other times hes damn near likeable. its confusing. but brilliant.
anyway, please update soonish, i know you said its going to be a while and difficult but im hoping!!
anyway, brilliant brilliant chapter. you really write a good, action packed and engrossing story.
cheers
i can never tell if i like joshua. sometimes hes such an arse and sometimes hes down right scary and other times hes damn near likeable. its confusing. but brilliant.
anyway, please update soonish, i know you said its going to be a while and difficult but im hoping!!
anyway, brilliant brilliant chapter. you really write a good, action packed and engrossing story.
cheers
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your unique voice, Christopher is quite a character! It's been really exciting ... looking forward to more. Thanks so much!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story.
Update soon, please. ;)
Update soon, please. ;)
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi i just got back from a long holiday trip and just found out that you updated your story already! i am so happy... love this chapt .. can;t wait to see how well our little hacker is gonna prove himself worthy of this company! now i am off to read your next chapt~
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, I can't believe you made me wait that long for an upate. This is my favorite story. No joke.