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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot, oh so very hot.
god, am I writing always the same in my reviews?
well if I do, I'm sure it's entirely what you have exspected. since they are just too hot not to mention. and the situations too.....well, yeah, you know.
strangley enough it gets more and more clearly that you created those characters only to delight us with their sex scenes.
this chapter was just too obvious and somehow-though being a very plot loving person- I like it.
god, am I writing always the same in my reviews?
well if I do, I'm sure it's entirely what you have exspected. since they are just too hot not to mention. and the situations too.....well, yeah, you know.
strangley enough it gets more and more clearly that you created those characters only to delight us with their sex scenes.
this chapter was just too obvious and somehow-though being a very plot loving person- I like it.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, yummy. These two are seriously screwed up, and also seriously hot. Christopher has some growing up to do, but he's also a rather sympathetic character--I do feel so bad for him. More importantly, though, I am languishing in impatience for teh secks! (Why do I get the feeling that Joshua won't be in the slightest bit romantic or overly caring, but he WILL be rather possessive?)
Update soon!
Update soon!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay i loved it im so glad u wrote a new chappie
it was very interesting seeing another side of his personality
very much enjoyed and wait with baited breath for your next installment :D
it was very interesting seeing another side of his personality
very much enjoyed and wait with baited breath for your next installment :D
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God. That was so hot, I don't even know what to do with myself. I'll definitely stick around for more, especially if there will be more yummy scenes like that one. That was a completely unexpected turn, yet you handled it so well, it was totally believable.
(and if you are really pathetic for falling utterly in love with a character you made up, then I am here being really pathetic right along with you. 'Cause damn...he's hot).
(and if you are really pathetic for falling utterly in love with a character you made up, then I am here being really pathetic right along with you. 'Cause damn...he's hot).
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want more action.
ROFL
ROFL
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww write more!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one single word:
hot
hot
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how the hell I have missed this story until now...it's fabulous! It's hot and smart and sexy and has a cool plot. I love your characters, especially Christopher...he has an amazing voice and keeps me constantly amused. The dialogue between him and Joshua is intriguing and perfect. And anyone who can casually throw in a Sailormoon reference like you did is just awesome. I'm sorry school is keeping you so busy, because I really am looking forward to reading some more of this. Keep up the excellent work.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like the story... umm do you research these things with weapons or is it your hobby?
you seem to know an awful lot and im assuming its not a fib... kind of scary for little old me, but i do like your story!
you seem to know an awful lot and im assuming its not a fib... kind of scary for little old me, but i do like your story!
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this today, and waaaa! I want more! It's really good, I should be asleep already, but I had to read the whole thing. I hope you'll update it soon!
Okay, I'm heading off to bed now...
Okay, I'm heading off to bed now...