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oooooooooooooh loving it so glad u dont write pointless crap just as long as u keep writing this is gold love it *gives cookies to feed the muse* :D

I only started reading this story today and was completely pulled in! Brilliant! I've become so attached to Chris! What can I say- Brilliant writing, fascinating characters, an amazing and complicated plot. I am constantly in suspense! And of course, though there's so much more to this story than the sex scenes-You're pretty damn good at writing those too!

I'm really looking forward to next chapter! And I would also love to receive an email when you update- It's stve3@yahoo.com. Thanks!

this is insane.
i mean this story and among the butterflies(cause i call them sister stories) is one of m yfavs in this 'special secret goverment project' genre but there is only 8 chapters and the ti ethat passes between each update....is frustrating.
but this i smuch better then going to ch 15 and then dropping the story forever lik esoem authors did.

Yay! You updated! *hugs* I loved this chapter...was a little disappointed cuz it seemed kind of short, but was still awesome! I felt so bad for Chris...Joshua's rejection was a lot nicer than i thought he would be doing that...Still was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for more...haha I'll probably re-read this chapter more eventually and end up commenting you again...I hope you don't mind.....:p Much loves for the update!
-Jades

Okay, that's it, you are so dead. *Whips out Gackt guns, and chases you while firing them.* You call that an update?! That wasn't very up to your standards, and here was nothing date like in at all. JOsh just tossed Chris out onto his ass! What the hell was that?! You have me waiting on edge for something good for ever, and that's all I get?! *Throws down, now empty guns, and picks up rocket launcher.* I want my fucking update, with the angst, and abuse of Chris in full bloom! Maybe some more teaseing, and personal injury wouldn't be remiss. Damn it! Where in the hell are my hot, and rough sex scenes?! You better come back here and give me what I want soon! Or I'm holding some one dear to you as a hostage! *Fires off rocket launcher then goes in serch of some one close to you to kidnap.* He he he he he. Oh sorry I'm suppossed to be mad.


~~Aki

Loving the story so far. Be sure to e-mail me when you have updates.

it's horrible every time you finish a chapter, because i just want to read more and more and more :P gimme more!

Aw poor Chris got rejected.... its would be a great revenge if Joshua starts falling for him later. Drive him mad! Mwah ha ha ha ha ha..... *ahem* sorry.... Yeah i have to admit i wasnt really paying attention to the BBC news that much heh heh...but i know there weren't gonna be smutt yet knowing how Joshua is. A story with good plot thats what this is! can;t wait for the next one....

I'd sure like to be update if its possible.. heres my add: dutsada@yahoo.com


Thanks

Yum, penis cookies ^^ All better! And of course, the update helped, too!
Joshua is so frustrating! Obviously he's at least attracted to Christopher, or else he wouldn't have done what he did. And that whole "sorry if I confused you"-bit, graaah! I just want to hit people who say that! But I really liked the way you wrote about the whole rejection-thing, what with the embarassment and feeling stupid and all. I feel Christopher's pain. *pats*
And I'd like to be on the update list, purleez! My email's Lionisbest@gmail.com

Thanks so much for the update! I'm so glad the saga continues... ;-) Chris has such an interesting voice, and I'm really enjoying all the characters... even stodgy Pierre has character. It's so fun to reach a yaoi version of Alias with a quirky voice/perspective. ;-)