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January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey just wanted to say that i think your story is intresting (and smutty)
i look forward to reading more (no pressure)
my email: prittypinkpuffball@yahoo.com
(for the updates)
xD
-Mae
i look forward to reading more (no pressure)
my email: prittypinkpuffball@yahoo.com
(for the updates)
xD
-Mae
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg....i love this story...I started it yesterday and stayed up to 2am lol i couldnt stop reading!!! i laughed so many times i love the humor in this story please add me to ur update list!! amxharux@aol.com hope u update soon!!!!!
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please can we know what happen next? Is Pierre really trying to start a war? Is joshua on the good or the bad side? By the way the sex is hot in this story but what really has me stuck is the emotional side. I'm always completely caught by stories about neglected children and Chris is a good specimen. I like how bitter and disabused he is. The way he goes in the relationship with Joshua, not expecting it to ever become something deeper but then still hoping is really heartbreaking. I hope he'll find someone who really cares (I hope Joshua really cares). But for me to ever know you need to write the next chapter (pretty pretty please *puppy eyes*)
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November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more???
i love this story!
i love this story!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that it has been forever since you've updated. I was hoping that you would update this story. I'm addicted and I'd absolutely hate, hate, hate for this to be the end. Please?
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
I managed to stumble on your story thanks to "The Slash Pile" over at livejournal, and I must say I'm glad I did! I love the tale you're spinning here- I really, really do. Usually I don't go for secret organization plots, but this one has really caught my interest. And your characters make me smile so hard! :D
I must say that I love Chris and Joshua's interactions. I love the sex scenes (obviously) but even more I love their bantering outside and inside work. Their personalities are polar opposites and yet they have such an amazing chemistry, that it makes me want to whack them over the head sometimes when they're being turds to each other. As for the rest of the gang, I gotta admit I have a /slight/ obssesion over Pierre. (This may be because I have a French character named Pierre too, haha!) Though, oddly enough, I don't find myself wanting him to be paired with Chris. I imagine a situation where another man comes in and serves as a father-figure for Chris and then somehow robo-Pierre falls in love with him (or something close enough) and then there's this amazing foursome. -drool-
(awkward cough) ANYWAY (enough about my weirdo fantasies) just dropping in to plead for another chapter. You have something great going on here and it would be sad to see it drop off. Although, I don't really see you as the type of person who would leave us hanging. :)
Good luck with whatever college studies you have, or anything else that might be troubling you at this moment in time! <3
I managed to stumble on your story thanks to "The Slash Pile" over at livejournal, and I must say I'm glad I did! I love the tale you're spinning here- I really, really do. Usually I don't go for secret organization plots, but this one has really caught my interest. And your characters make me smile so hard! :D
I must say that I love Chris and Joshua's interactions. I love the sex scenes (obviously) but even more I love their bantering outside and inside work. Their personalities are polar opposites and yet they have such an amazing chemistry, that it makes me want to whack them over the head sometimes when they're being turds to each other. As for the rest of the gang, I gotta admit I have a /slight/ obssesion over Pierre. (This may be because I have a French character named Pierre too, haha!) Though, oddly enough, I don't find myself wanting him to be paired with Chris. I imagine a situation where another man comes in and serves as a father-figure for Chris and then somehow robo-Pierre falls in love with him (or something close enough) and then there's this amazing foursome. -drool-
(awkward cough) ANYWAY (enough about my weirdo fantasies) just dropping in to plead for another chapter. You have something great going on here and it would be sad to see it drop off. Although, I don't really see you as the type of person who would leave us hanging. :)
Good luck with whatever college studies you have, or anything else that might be troubling you at this moment in time! <3
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please, only tell me if you are going to continue this story or not...that's the only thing I want to know right now. It's cruel to leave us like this without even telling us the reason...
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon?...
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey i think your story and characters rock so far! i've really enjoyed reading it so far...are you going to be adding any more chapters in the future? if you have a mailing list for updates would you please add me? my addy is danteanderson56@yahoo.com
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT! that it will be like denied orgasm! I avoid this story, along with few other promising stories like "Muffin" and "Independence" because I knew that I will be craving for more and in awe because it's been a year darling... a year since your last chapter. I can understand if you are having a block (a very huge one i believe) and not enough time too. You know what I really want right now HM HM HM? :D *grins maniacally* I remembered this episode of our innocent anime Doraemon, where Nobita locked up a mangaka just to be able write for him. See that's what I want to do right now. Kidnap you from that real life impeding you from writing. And lock you up in a room specially made so that you can get comfortable to write with very strict deadline (I bet you would work faster with the right stimulation hum hum? ;-) *whip!*)
It is frustating you see, I am so in love with your writing and characterization. I'm glad that you stick to Chris's voice despite of the first chapter. And girl, you voice him really well, his inner thinking, his insecurities. I love it when a writer care to show not to tell. You show it to as like a master you are. And it felt like you believe us your reader. The story pushed all my buttons and very hot sex scene too. I really want to see how you make the turn around, how actually the weaker one winning over the dominant one like you oh PROMISED... So please, if it takes a pharagraph a day, or two ;-) write it down. edit it again all you want, but just dont give up on it, because the hell we (your faithful reader) will.
It is frustating you see, I am so in love with your writing and characterization. I'm glad that you stick to Chris's voice despite of the first chapter. And girl, you voice him really well, his inner thinking, his insecurities. I love it when a writer care to show not to tell. You show it to as like a master you are. And it felt like you believe us your reader. The story pushed all my buttons and very hot sex scene too. I really want to see how you make the turn around, how actually the weaker one winning over the dominant one like you oh PROMISED... So please, if it takes a pharagraph a day, or two ;-) write it down. edit it again all you want, but just dont give up on it, because the hell we (your faithful reader) will.