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for Crappy Predicament

by mehmeh

person aki
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I damand fluff and and than like 4x the angst to balance it out.

P.S I want to see an angry / jelous Joshua I think that would so rock

Btw sry for the short crapy review is like 2 am atm <3 u
person papu
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure that the het in this chapter will eventually lead to slashesque jealousy in following chapters, and I'll forgive you if you update often. K?
person Aleks
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was shocked.....het sex........but well better than nothing ;)

his first outside mission without Joshua....I want more interaction between these two (but you already know that, don´t you ? :)

till next time.....
person SexOnAStick
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomg. i love ur story sooo much. the whole organization thing is a total turn on. and i loveee joshua. i wish those two would just fuck already. too much tension. hehe. pllease eamail me wen next upload comes.
person Koira
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, don't say anything about the het stuff ^_^ I love stories to be realistic, and that always means lotsa het. Because that's the way the real world goes. If that makes any sense. And even if it does, there is still the fact that reading your story and whining about being realistic doesn't match. oh well. Love it :)
person drutto
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy squee* You updated. I've been anticipating this a lot, and it finally happened.

Anywho, a great chapter. And I wasn't disgusted with the het, surprisingly. It fit the story well actually; at least our favourite geek boy got his groove on. XD

SO, thank you for blessing us with an update.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, that basically made my YEAR. awesome chapter! even the "eww het" part didn't turn me off at all! I actually kind of like the girl... she's got the balls of a bull, man!

thank you so much for updating. :) I know life can seriously kick your ass sometimes (believe me; I have my Chinese final tomorrow and I'm droooowning in work), so I'm so glad you are able to write still. fantastic job as always!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahh, I just re-read this for like, the 20th time and I thought I'd leave you a note to say... I loved it, I love it, I will love it! Here's to hoping life won't keep you from updating for too much longer. ;) I don't think I can stand the anticipation!
person Aki
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon ( I hope u did not forget about this)and I demand to be aded to the mailing list
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay...I had to review again...haha...I just reread your chapter*sighs*
okay..So Chris doesn't know that he told Joshua all that stuff about himself? and what the hell is wrong with Joshua!!! *gasps* Why didn't he just grab Chris and rut like a bunny? He so had to have wanted to...He's got a poker shoved up his arse...*grumbles* but still....I loved the angsty rejection...I love how Joshua was so placating to Chris because it just made it so much more angsty to me...
one thing....Lia, Chris, Joshua...Love triangle? *Sherlock Holmes stare* Chris goes out with Lia to make Joshua jealous then Joshua jumps Chris and they rut like bunnies...
See they should just forget about everything else and stay in bed and...*dun dun dun* hump like dogs in heat....S
See how everything comes back to have a good ole romp? *hint, hint* Okay I shall sit back and just let you write at your own pace...I shall wait patiently for the good rough angsty sex..*pants and passes out from blood loss due to massive nose bleed*
I am a whore for your updates so...I shall wait patiently *sighs* And until your next installment...
-Jades
*hugs times a bazillion for being such a smexy writer*