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for Crappy Predicament

by mehmeh

person Nightrosefox
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I just wanted to let you know that I'm keeping count. *Smiles as she cleans her Gackt guns.* This makes 2 chapers that don't have my much wanted Josh and Chris S&M smutty sex. You said that you wouldn't have any of that for atleast 2-3 three chapers....*Putsguns back together with slow precise movements*......afterwards, if I don't see any, I get to use you for target practice until I do. *Laughed psycoticly as she pulls out 2 crates of amo.* So um...when should I be expecting the next update?

~~Aki
person Kat
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Lots of fun, as always. Have to admit, I love Christopher in this chapter.

Keep it coming.
person sstt
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter! I really missed this story! I've actually discovered that I can read het as long as its well written and of course you're great at it!I thought it was very hot (Especially her hitting on Chris lol). Loved the bit of interaction between Chris and Joshua- You just bring up the chemistry between with them very clearly.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! *hugs*

I've been waiting and waiting for you to update this.

Great chapter! I missed Joshua, but Christopher's view on everything more than makes up for it. He's so funny. XDDD And picturing him with his disguise. Priceless. LOL!

*waits impatiently for the next one* XD
person dutsada
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah i know. Joshua is Joshua.. Poor Chris...But its great that his second mission didn't screw up... and thanks for informing me bout your latest update! Love the chap!
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter! ^^ poor christopher, but it sure is fun to see him all riled up whenever joshua's being mean to him ;)
and about that other man, are u going to use him to make joshua jealous? preeetty please do^^!!!
person sanguineheart
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can you add me to your mailing list for updates? :) This is a GREAT story and I can't wait to see how it turns out. ^__^ I was upset when I realized I had come to the final chapter.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
***smothers with hugs and throws cookies at your head repetitively*** You made my fucking day!!!!!!!!! *Does rain dance thinking it's the victory dance!* I think I told you how much I loove your story?? Well I do...and I always search the list for an update on it...And today I was reading some reviews on my story, and I was like I am going to check the list again....annnnddd! DUN DUN DUN! yay! I know this is sporadic....But anywho onto the actual review *rolls eyes* So I laughed really hard about the blow job....Poor Chris! He made me want to hug him and, well transform into Joshua and fuck him into the floor....err I mean I wanted badly to comfort him in his moment of uncomfortable and hardness...:P There was like NOOOO Joshua practically in this chapter.....I think when you get around to posting the chapter with Joshua and Chris going at it like beasts I will probably die of heart failure, or loss of blood through my nose....If I was a guy I'd probably die from all the blood migrating too fast towards my cock, but thankfully I don't have that problem :P Thats how sexy your characters are!
The spy scene was awesome! But what exactly where they doing? I was kind of confused...? I feel so bad for Chris...He's like so lovable and smexy and totally shaggable and he's got this gorgeous antagonist who wont drop his pants....*Sighs* and instead is denying Chris constantly....*sniffles* Okay this is by far the weirdest and longest* i think* comment that I have ever left....and I am sure I'll reread the chapter again later and comment on something I forgot to say.... Oh, by the way...I am sure the story would've been fine if maybe you added a random bunny jumping/slash/ humping moment...haha but I understand the whole plot thing *sighs dramatically in longing :] * But I love the tension in the story....Well, until you add the next installment, or I remember whatever I forgot to add,
Your Obsessed Fan, ;)
Jades
*Hugs Chris and Glares at Josh*
*rethinks her strategy of them getting into bed and sends Joshua a giant copy of SEX: FOR DUMMIES*
:P Cant wait for your next chapter! Sorry the review was a little.....helter skelter, I am a little...hyper :P Much loves
person aki
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I damand fluff and and than like 4x the angst to balance it out.

P.S I want to see an angry / jelous Joshua I think that would so rock

Btw sry for the short crapy review is like 2 am atm <3 u
person aki
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I damand fluff and and than like 4x the angst to balance it out.

P.S I want to see an angry / jelous Joshua I think that would so rock

Btw sry for the short crapy review is like 2 am atm <3 u

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