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“I want us to have sex next time,” I panted against his neck.
Well, don't we all? ~.^

I am seriously in love with Christopher, he is/has a wonderful deep character. I am glad he is. See, the story would be good enough if there was only ONE extremely interesting character (meaning Joshua, of course). Most authors would have thrown some boring average teenage boy at him, someone like "oh I don't know if I am gay or not and I am so scared of all this MI shit but oh Joshua is sooo pretty", you know? Even then it might be worth reading to me. But this way it is so very believable that it gives me goose bumps (alright, let's not look at the crazy storyline here. I am talking about the interpersonal relationships ^^)
Also, the sex scene (?) that was this chapter really stood out among all the ust-> kiss-> bj-> anal-> happiness on this site. The way you describe body reactions alone is wow.

You better print this review, frame it and nail it to the wall above your bed. I hardly ever praise the author in a review. And especially not this excessively =p
I wonder what came over me... -.-

That bastard! Joshua is so cruel. My god the things he said. Its so insulting. I would have cried a whole lot more if i was in his position. But it seems that Joshua does have some kind of attraction towards Chris though he would never admit. Sigh guess i'll have to wait for the next chapt.

Thanks for the lemon!

Wooo update!

Yeah, well think of the mental trauma I recieved when I thought of Joshua speaking gangsta bitch language, complete with bling and a backside to boot. It was oh-so wrong wrong WRONG! ...Could be fun though *Evades swishy dildo*

Again, awesome chapter. I usually hate sadistic characters, but I have totally fallen (somewhat like Chris) for Joshua. There's just something incredibly hot about the way he patronizes our little protagonist *smacks lips* I want more, NAO! All we need now is for guy X to get into the picture, make joshua jealous and attempt to hump Chris into the next millenium (which instead was done by Joshua)!

So much love to this story. I love well written and original fiction. Double bonus with the fact that it's a spy story. I love spies! And I love this story!

Dang! What a story!!! Unbelievable!! Wow!!! I'm speechless!

Thanks,
R

I would love to see joshua jelous. He is all high and mighty so I would love to see him react to

stupid thingie cut my reviwe in half >_<
I would love to see joshua jelous. He is all high and mighty so I would love to see him react to
someoen else wanting chris.
thanx for the chapter

lovies (^_^)

I must say, this chapter sure as hell ruined a good pair of knickers. I knew Joshua would be kinky, but wow. Creamy facials and all. My fancies have been tickled because I'm the biggest pervert this side of The Neverland Ranch!

Christopher's determination is so cute. But I don't know if he knows exactly what he's getting himself into. The guy seems to just think of him as a slut... And he's kind of not acting differently. Ah well. Maybe he'll get his romance in the end. But wow, he's an eager little thing!

I'm curious about Joshua's former girlfriend. From Joshua's point of view. But I guess he won't be opening up about that any time soon.

So yeah. I loved the Christopher/Joshua interaction. And this was quite a...steamy interaction. Wow. I love you. XD.

I was just re-reading you story again....*like usual :)* and I just had to re comment....I don't remember if I asked you...so I shall ask again *sorry* Christopher like confessed all his insecurities to Joshua, and Joshua never said anything, and Christopher doesn't remember saying anything right?? So, are you going to bring that up in a later chapter? *waggles her eyebrows* oh and I actually I liked the Het you put in....because well most couples are straight, and it's good to show both...besides I thought it was soo hot that Chris got a hard on from watching her blow that creep......
So....someday you should make a side story and have Chris and Joshua do this undercover mission in Cosplay...:) just kidding....But yeah.....*sighs*
Oh right, By the way is this love triangle guy going to be a character we already me? or is he going to be a new guy? OOOH, maybe he'll be this super like....sweet, loving, totally great boyfriend material that mysteriously loooooves Chris, and then Josh confronts Chris and Chris goes out with said suspiciously sweet boyfriend and then that suspiciously sweet guy ends up being the guy who swindled the money away, and then rapes poor Christopher, and then.... Joshua beats up the boyfriend guy and then steals his money and frames Chris, and just before he leaves, he wraps Chris in a burlap bag and takes him away to be his harem....

well, maybe not.....it's a good thing you're writing this story and not me XD!
Until your next chapter,
Jades
*sorry for another sporadic comment*
I remain addicted to your story.
Your updates are my drugs :)
*stares blankly at screen*

This is great! I'm a big fan of (eventually resolved) UST, and this fic is like heaven to me. Angst, tension and (in this case, Christopher’s) hormones flying until everything builds up and BOOM, we'll have Joshy and Chris humping like animals in heat.

The idea of having another guy coming into the story and hitting on Chris is just... URGH *Dies* too good for words. Joshua'll cause himself permanent brain damage trying to decide if he should beat the crap out of the other guy, fuck Chris into the closest convenient mattress or just do both (he does come across as the possessive guy rather strongly). I can just imagine it:

Joshua walks in on guy trying to stick his tongue down Chris’ throat.

Joshua: Oh no you didn’t! (Complete with hand gestures and bitchy voice)

Mother jokes are passed back and forth (‘Whatcho say about my momma?’) until Joshua gets bored and shoots guy with his beloved gun.

Chris: Me luv yu long taim!

… or not…

Hey, could you add me to your updating list (gittajk@hotmail.com), I want to know when this will be updated!