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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh i forgot my email! haha i'll be checking it daily for ur updates! =D
zettaiyaoi@hotmail.com

xoxoxoxo

I really like you story, it's well written and you clearly do lots of research, giving the whole secret organisation thing a somewhat authentic feel.. Chris is great, I love his inner monologues and bitchiness, he comes off as very human (and very hot, haha.) About Joshua.. well, maybe this isn't where you're going with this, but I would LOVE it if Chris somehow managed to break that cold facade of his and dominate HIM. Because, goddamn, hot as he is, he's an arrogant bastard and he has it coming.
Also, if you have a mailing list for updates, I'd love to be on it =)

oh sorry, the email.. it's eline5@hotmail.com

hi,
just loved this chapter!!! can't wait for the rest of the story!
You are a great writer!!

AJ

Wow that was hot! I am of course positive Chris will achieve what he wants if only for his endless stubbornness- I really like that in him btw.

The het thing- It's odd for me that even though I enjoy het stories in books, movies etc, I was never interested in it when reading fic-It was always slash pairing who caught my interest and from there it want to slash original stories... It's only a while ago when there was one het pairing I liked that I actually searched fics to read about. That's what I meant about discovering I can read het- because usually in the fic world I have no interest in it, though it's growing. And again, you are very good at it-though after this chapter I see you've found you niche :D

I absoloutely adore this! ;;Tackle-hug;;. I didn't read it for so long because, for some strange reason, the summary put me off (sounded like something from the Matrix, Neo, a computer, and then baam! A world full of weirdness and karate). I am so glad I read this though. Can't wait for an update

Oh My God. That was fucking hot.

yay!! squeee!!!
christ on a pogo stick!! man that was hot sexin!
im so happy you kept joshua as joshua, and nice and mean and sadistic. its who he is, i would have been devistated if you had i dunno.... made him all fluffy and secretly in love with him or something *barf*
it was good, loved the roughness and anger and fighting, (coz im weird like that) and it was brill that youkept chris a bit cocky and sarcastic even while he was... yes...
anyway!! yay! update soooon!

Mummy, will mine get that big when I grow up?

oh my GOD ! that was brilliant, I couldn´t stop laughing!!!

and sunshine wake up, I remembered my ´wonderful´ roommate waking me up much too early with the same words! after a long party.....I wanted to kill him just like our genius.... :)

and so much interaction .... finally! (dancing around)
but why did you stop writing??? I´m waiting for more !!! ;)

Did I ever mention that I was a greedy bitch? *snuggles her laptop* I have been momenarly passified, but my need for more will serface again, and I have plenty of amo waiting just incase it takes you a while to feed it. So I hope you plan on feeding me again very soon. I want more, just like this. I was so happy I giggled the enire time I read it. Now I have to go nail my BF. You have done well and deserve a treat, tell me what you'd like and I'll get it for you. Keep in mind, this was a small compensation, so it will be a small treat. Give me more, and I'll give you better treats. See, I can be reasonable. XD.



~~Aki