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Wow! I love this youre SO freaking talented! i LOVE it!

Gosh - you've really turned up the action! Thanks so much. I'm really enjoying the CJ interaction. C is such an interesting character and I love the voice you put to him. Please continued to be inspired! This was a brilliant update!

Just finished reading this all in one sitting. I really really love this story. So much for it having no plot. I don't know who is more of a dick Chris or Joshua. I'm saying Joshua for right now since I don't know his back story. I was kinda surprised to find something so well well thought out and written on AF. Every once in while this site really surprises me. Nicely done. Looking forward to future updates.

OmG! I was about to come and bitch and moan about there being no updates, and there was a new chapter! How the hell I missed that I have no clue, but!!! *ANGST!!!!!!* I loved this scene! Finally some Chris/Joshua smexy smut! But, I almost cried for Christopher!!!! Joshua is such a bastard sometimes.... I mean sometimes he's nice and funny*well nice-ish* and then other times he crushes Chris's spirit ruthlessly....It's sooo devastating...*sniffles* I mean it was hot as hell, but sad as heck to. I mean Chris can be a smart ass a lot of times, but Joshua doesn't have to be such a bastard. I hope Christopher beats him up or saves his sorry ass later in the story and then rubs it in the sexy pricks face. Lols, By the way, this part made me laugh so hard.
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“It’s...uh...” I searched frantically for the right adjective. Stiff? Monstrous? Scary looking? “...hard.”
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I can't wait for more....I kind of hope that Joshua hurts Chris sooo badly and then* gets wild crazy ideas* that the Mystery guy who I think I know who it is *squeakly squeals* comforts him, and then Chris starts to fall, and then Joshua hurts him again, and then.....um....Right then Joshua the arse realizes how much the hot man sex means to him, er I mean how much Chris means to him, and then happily ever after with white bows and pinks hearts.... and then on the other hand I hope that Chris kicks Joshua's butt, and then he also becomes this amazing agent that kicks arse...and OMG I JUST GOT THIS HORRID THOUGHT! what if Joshua finally gets back in the good graces of the company and then gets sent away,.....Chris'll be heart broken...or what if *bwahahha evil laugh* Chris does sooo good that HE gets raised up...oh the joy....
By the way are you ever going to have a chapter or chapters where his family meets with Chris again...That'd be such an awesomely angsty one...Plus not to mention I hope you eventually do a Christmas one...*sighs as she pictures Chris with his arms tied behind his back with black leather, with a vibe in his butt, not to mention a c-ring...laid under the Christmas tree while Joshua sits and watches.....pervy moment sorry haha....anyways oh right!!! Do you plan on having a happy ending with the two of them? By the way back o the family idea, I'd love for like a Joshua moment when Chris leaves the room*and somehow Joshua is in the room with the family* and then Joshua like has a random protective/bashing Chris moment...sighs happily and dreamily....I can't wait for future peaceful moments between them...*whispers-secretly I am a huge angsty romantic comfort fan with happy endings*
Okay sorry for the huge comment, but I figured since I missed the update I might as well leave the equivalent of what probably would have been two comments anyways!!!
I remain the faithful addict to Crappy Predicament*aka *Squeals* *Glomps* It's Updated! *Squeals* Story....*coughs-don't ask*
Until your next installment which I hopefully don't miss,
Jades

BY THE WAY THAT DAMN JOSHUA BETTER READ HOW TO TREAT BIG MOUTHED SUPER ADORABLE NOT TO MENTION FUCK ABLE AND LOVABLE NOT TO MENTION IN EXTREME NEED FOR LOVE BOYFRIENDS/LOVERS/SEX TOYS

FOR DUMMIES ...sorry I forgot that part...by the way do you take fan art for your story? I was thinking of doing a certain Christmas scene....*la la la*

Ahahahaha~! It's seems like forever sinve I've read a sex scene! Kudos to you for the awesome job on it!

And I'm sorry! I couldn't help it! I was giggleng like mad the entire time I was reading this chapter! I almost snorted coke...haha double meaning...>.<

I think I'm manic...

But dude, that whole uber-sadist-'Be-my-bitch' joshua was just so funny! Ahahaha! I need to see more of him and Chris SOON!

Hmmm? Josh will have a rival (sorta)? Is it Eric? Is it Eric? I want it to be Eric!

Add me to your mailing list, okay?

Add me to the update list, yeah? psycho_cookie69@yahoo.com

Chris is so funny...

I'm still waiting on that promised chapter. Amuse me my dear, and I'll give you a big treat, a chapter for your eyes only of my own story before I post it. If you like it then I will treat you with a chapter for each one you write. Email me and let me know. However if you don't deliver what you promise......I'm afraid I'm going to have to put my treasured Gackt guns to use. Ja-ne deary!



~~Aki

Hiya!I've been reading this story since forever and I love it! Although I wish there can be some fluff/romance. Keep up the good work!
~MaryBell~

PS
Please can you put me the update list,too? email is soulceller@gmail.com
Thank you

Review for ch10
that was hot...omfg SO HOT! *melts*

i loveeee your work! ... i cant wait for more...the two of them are just so AHHHHHHHHHH!!! *fangirls*
i'm a mess now! haha! i swear! all u did was blow and finger... AND THAT WAS BLOODY AWESOME! i can only imagin how fucking godly the real deal will be! no i cant...cuz u'd just amaze me again and again! Christopher is such a bitchy bottom i love it! like he's nothing like those weak subs in other stories! haha even in the situation where he just had to take Joshua's cock... he was still on fire! i love how strong u make Joshua and Christopher! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down*

i cant wait for more! *dances* i'm so glad i ran into this! haha *give u a big bananna* your SOOOOOOOO AMAZINGGGGGG!!!!!!
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