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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh HOW CAN U END IT THERE?????????? NEIN NEIN UPDATEEE T___T
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! LOVE IT! I hope that you continue with the story. Can't wait to see what happens next, so keep up the good work.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah! I haven't been able to leave a review for about two chapters and it's horrible!!!!!!!!!!!*adds emphasis*
Sorry, I was/am having huge major computer/personal issues, and was out of town for a month to! But now I shall review!!!
*OOOOOOOOOOHH EEEMMMMM GEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* sorry I had to do that. I love your story, have I ever mentioned that? It bears repeating. The sex scene was sooooooooooo depressing, but I loved it. Chris is such an angsty bastard and I love him. By the way, I think your purple swishy dildo got stuck up Joshua's ass. I think we've established that I adore Chris. BUT JOSHUA IS SUCH A D*I*C*K! and I loves him to! I have drawn you artwork, but it left my mind that I do not own a scanner any more...so as soon as I find one I SHALL send it to you via a link in a review....but it's not coloured because I suck at colouring...anyways back to your story....
I loved the milkshake ringtone!!!! Funniest thing ever, because I did that to my brother...he hates me so I stole his phone and made that his ringtone when it first came out...I loved it sooo much!!!
If your story hadn't already been my favoritest est story ever it would have been bumped up to it, but instead its now on my list of Must Read for all Eternity books.....*never stops reading your story* I am obsessive a little I guess....BuT I LOvVVVVEEeEEeed your artwork!!! Adored! GAGHAGAHHH! Its exactly as I pictured Joshua....Chris was awesome, but I pictured him more, pouty...BUT *looks around for little kids* FUCKING *sorry* awesome! I love love love love love you!!! *glomps* **by the way, this is the most hyper review I have ever left, and you can feel free to delete it because I know its pathetic** By the way, I don't stalk you for updates. I'm not that obsessive. *whispers I stalk the update list* Unlike my story*shudders in horror* your story is amazingly addictive. I love to check the list, and then see that your story was updated. Then it makes my whole day feel so much better. On the days you update my whole day seems brighter. *honestly* But, jaded4eva13@yahoo.com is my email. If you want to add me go ahead, or if you want to email me and say leave you alone.(**sniffles**) haha, Okay anyways. I love your story.
I shall continue to stalk the lists for more of your amazing installments,
Jades
* Since Joshua has the large purple swishy dildo up his arse, maybe you should get another, like maybe a purple swishy vibrating dildo...with claws....and teeth....and spikes, and then shove that up Joshua's ass and take your other one back...* ^_^ poor Joshua, he like gets decimated in my head, and cocky smart mouth lovable ass Chris gets motivated to sainthood pedestal lols....Not quite but you get it...Sorry for the sporadic review, but I just can't seem to tame them
Sorry, I was/am having huge major computer/personal issues, and was out of town for a month to! But now I shall review!!!
*OOOOOOOOOOHH EEEMMMMM GEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* sorry I had to do that. I love your story, have I ever mentioned that? It bears repeating. The sex scene was sooooooooooo depressing, but I loved it. Chris is such an angsty bastard and I love him. By the way, I think your purple swishy dildo got stuck up Joshua's ass. I think we've established that I adore Chris. BUT JOSHUA IS SUCH A D*I*C*K! and I loves him to! I have drawn you artwork, but it left my mind that I do not own a scanner any more...so as soon as I find one I SHALL send it to you via a link in a review....but it's not coloured because I suck at colouring...anyways back to your story....
I loved the milkshake ringtone!!!! Funniest thing ever, because I did that to my brother...he hates me so I stole his phone and made that his ringtone when it first came out...I loved it sooo much!!!
If your story hadn't already been my favoritest est story ever it would have been bumped up to it, but instead its now on my list of Must Read for all Eternity books.....*never stops reading your story* I am obsessive a little I guess....BuT I LOvVVVVEEeEEeed your artwork!!! Adored! GAGHAGAHHH! Its exactly as I pictured Joshua....Chris was awesome, but I pictured him more, pouty...BUT *looks around for little kids* FUCKING *sorry* awesome! I love love love love love you!!! *glomps* **by the way, this is the most hyper review I have ever left, and you can feel free to delete it because I know its pathetic** By the way, I don't stalk you for updates. I'm not that obsessive. *whispers I stalk the update list* Unlike my story*shudders in horror* your story is amazingly addictive. I love to check the list, and then see that your story was updated. Then it makes my whole day feel so much better. On the days you update my whole day seems brighter. *honestly* But, jaded4eva13@yahoo.com is my email. If you want to add me go ahead, or if you want to email me and say leave you alone.(**sniffles**) haha, Okay anyways. I love your story.
I shall continue to stalk the lists for more of your amazing installments,
Jades
* Since Joshua has the large purple swishy dildo up his arse, maybe you should get another, like maybe a purple swishy vibrating dildo...with claws....and teeth....and spikes, and then shove that up Joshua's ass and take your other one back...* ^_^ poor Joshua, he like gets decimated in my head, and cocky smart mouth lovable ass Chris gets motivated to sainthood pedestal lols....Not quite but you get it...Sorry for the sporadic review, but I just can't seem to tame them
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nope not mean to leave things there. Not mean at all.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn it stopped at the good part! you better update soon before i expire from the wait!!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I'm stuck at home sicker than sick AND you just cut the story off at the worst point ever! Nooooo! I want punishment! :sobs: You must update soon!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this Arc, mostly because you don't cater to the usual emo/docile uke and overdemading seme roles. Don't get me wrong, I belive Joshua is plenty demanding but what makes him interesting is that he straddles that line of dangerous insanity and genius manipulation. I started out really disliking Christopher... (I mean who really can fall immediately in love with bitchy whiny brats besides those that create them *evil laugh*), but I really am finding he's grown on me given his obvious need for joshua's aproval/ his adorable propensity for getting himself into trouble. This chapter was great because I honestly nearly spit water on my computer when "milkshake brings all the boys to the yard" played from Joshua's cell phone... mostly because that's happened to everyone now and then when friends pull stupid pranks. Anywho, I love the story and hope that you'll add me to the update list s I can know when there is more hilarious goodness.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hate that song,but lookie its been put to good use.
you need to update faster to satisfy my hunger but that's just me being selfish.
you need to update faster to satisfy my hunger but that's just me being selfish.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What?!! the milk shake song ringer!!!! in the cafeteria!!!!!
lol. that was hilarious.
but, uh, chirs' infatuation with josh is borderline twisted. will it always be that way? i mean, you siad in this chapter, he was abused as a kid with his dad. so, hes like a sucker for abuse now.? twisted, see. chris needs to get his priorities in check.
and man, that fanart was great! especially yours. your really good at digital painting! when i saw the picture, it was like a color photograph oh them, i was like, oh crap, thats them!
really great job on that and the chapter, the story itself, i love it.
do more, art and more chapters.
lol. that was hilarious.
but, uh, chirs' infatuation with josh is borderline twisted. will it always be that way? i mean, you siad in this chapter, he was abused as a kid with his dad. so, hes like a sucker for abuse now.? twisted, see. chris needs to get his priorities in check.
and man, that fanart was great! especially yours. your really good at digital painting! when i saw the picture, it was like a color photograph oh them, i was like, oh crap, thats them!
really great job on that and the chapter, the story itself, i love it.
do more, art and more chapters.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha so funny, specially the bit with the ring tone made me choke with laughter, but no worrys lol im fine now. Yay for the whole chapter