rate_review Reviews

If mike doesnt like being called Mike its better not to use it in the title.
You got the point across. It was disturbing and uncomfortable and if you set out to make people squirm, you did a good job.

Holy smut! How long have I been sitting here reading this? Poor poor girl. Michael's not a very nice guy. usually I don't read stories like this but it was so well and bluntly written. Some parts confused me because you were writing from both perspectives, and you would go from one paragraph with "mike's" p.o.v., then the next paragraph it would be Lily's p.o.v. I mean, I figured it out, but it was a little vague. Perhaps, some touching up to clear that up would suffice. Overall, nice work. Brutal, but shweet. Mike reminds me a little of my character, but my guy kills his victims. Mike should consider the same if he doesn't want to get caught, rich or not. :) Peace

While this story disgusts me, it also earns my respect for portraying rape as it is- a horrifying act that leaves people broken, performed by horrifying people.

That is all.

this is probably the best fanfic that i have ever read in AFF. i am completly amazed by this that it's left me speechless...i certainly hope this is not your only fanfic because i soo want to check out other works from you!!!