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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEK! I love you!! keep writing man!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED it! it's funny light reading (try and keep that) has lots of funny crazy moments *chuckles softly*
All in one it's a winner and if you can make the smut SUPER hot and heavy... it'll be a greater winner *giggles*
All in one it's a winner and if you can make the smut SUPER hot and heavy... it'll be a greater winner *giggles*
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hugs!
Hugs!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what they were talking about???
Cole and Kyle are so into each other!! lol ^_____^
That was so nice of Cole to make breakfast to everyone like that!!
I can't wait for more! I really like it! It's cute! ^^
Cole and Kyle are so into each other!! lol ^_____^
That was so nice of Cole to make breakfast to everyone like that!!
I can't wait for more! I really like it! It's cute! ^^
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!! I love it. Taste like cookies and strawberry. Sweet and salty. I like the tension you make between Cole and Kyle. LOve is the air. Indeed, Indeed * Gigle like a rabbit*. Sorry. you're a great author Rikku-chan. Keep it up and you'll be the best. Waiting forever for your next update, dear.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes!! An update!!! thank youuuu!!!
Man, Kyle is so funny!! I really like how he thinks! ^^
BTW, will you make a Code POV??? I'd really like to see how he thinks too!
...But only if you want to do it of course! ^______^
And man, Chase is such a cute and caring kid!!
It's cool that he respects other ppl like that ('cause most kids usually don't)! *hugs him*
I can't wait for more and thanks alot for the update!!
Man, Kyle is so funny!! I really like how he thinks! ^^
BTW, will you make a Code POV??? I'd really like to see how he thinks too!
...But only if you want to do it of course! ^______^
And man, Chase is such a cute and caring kid!!
It's cool that he respects other ppl like that ('cause most kids usually don't)! *hugs him*
I can't wait for more and thanks alot for the update!!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot!!! It's so cool when you review only to find that there's another chapter!!! ^______^
Thanks for the great update!!! They are both so cute together!!
Thanks for the great update!!! They are both so cute together!!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww Kyle, Nice to see Chase and Allison getting along so well :)
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
could cole be the stalker or is it someone more sinister?... great now im definently gonna have to keep reading cause i hate/love mysteries and its really cute... wish my lil bro was as calm as chase he's seven and all he seems to like to do is run, jump, crash, annoy, break things and get into aurguments with my other sisters... anyway now im rambling...please update soon!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no matter what anyone says dont change the POV! it gets really boring if u already know what everyon is thinking
eg. cole thinking 'Oh i wonder if he likes me he's so cute' and then we read kyle's POV 'Oh he's so hot i wonder if he's gay' see my point so matter how many ppl tell u to change POV dont do it cause it'll destroy how wonderful this story is... so dont liten when ppl ask u... they just hate mystery!
anyway this story is OMG BRILLIant!!!!!!! please please please update soon!!!!
though i think kyle is a lil too short it'd probably make more sence if he was 5'6 or 5'6 thats still really short but not too tiny tiney like a pixie
cole sounds really hot!!!!!!!
eg. cole thinking 'Oh i wonder if he likes me he's so cute' and then we read kyle's POV 'Oh he's so hot i wonder if he's gay' see my point so matter how many ppl tell u to change POV dont do it cause it'll destroy how wonderful this story is... so dont liten when ppl ask u... they just hate mystery!
anyway this story is OMG BRILLIant!!!!!!! please please please update soon!!!!
though i think kyle is a lil too short it'd probably make more sence if he was 5'6 or 5'6 thats still really short but not too tiny tiney like a pixie
cole sounds really hot!!!!!!!