rate_review Reviews

great chapter, way to build up the suspense. keep up the awesome fic!

I've been following this story for a long time. I love the one with Roan too. With the other one I got a little lost though I can't remember why. I think you used a lot of POVs.

You've created a fantastic world. The tension in this chapter and the reactions were just wonderful. I look forward to reading more in the future.

Chapter 18

OMG!!! I love this story!!!!
The Layer, Kellen, and Gustin are hysterical together!!!!
(I think they need to be a threesome but their society doesn't
much go for that, hmmm?!!)

Love that they are hot, thinking, adults males and not some
redressed females with male parts!!! Excellent love story!!!!

Thanks,
R

Oh wow that was great

o0oooooooooooooooooooohhh.
this was really good!

Yay, an update finally. Very good, I was just waitint for him to get pregnant. Stick with it, and update as sooner please ;_; love your story.

FANTASTIC STORY , LOVE THE PLOT , CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
HOPE Y CONTINU TO WRITE BEAUTIFUL STORY LIKE THIS ONE UPDAYS SOON
THANK BY TAKING YOUR TIME TO WRITE FOR US TO ENJOY

I just reviewed Rift again when I found this update that made me very happy since it's my second favorite in the series; I want Gus and his mate to be happy whether it's staying on their own or not being exiles anymore; thanks for this update!

So I read half of this before but never finished. Now I went over all of it, and liked it more. The relationship between Kellan and Gustin seems more equal than that between humans and wolves in the compounds/packs, which is a nice change. But Kellan does like to exercise his 'right of the bigger' which is unfair, even though I'm sure Gustin is the person to think of ways around that! Again, you know you just gotta continue their story. Please? Pretty please? *Bambi eyes* We've had lots of hot secks and are getting to an angsty pivotal plot point - what now?? Possible babies, trading caravans, headhunting and plotting ex lovers, my gosh.
Oh and btw, this is me with the resilient mpreg squick trying to not imagine a man with boobs big enough to feed six babies... *grimace*
*lol* thanks for the story so far!

I must say that I enjoy this story the best!!!
The characters are easy and relatively angst free(SO FAR!!)
And some how, these two seem to be better suited to
one another! Very good writing!!

Thanks,
R