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Wow oh wow tha was great!

Adotre and Gus were cute although some of the egg laying made me queasy... but I like the idea of one of the babies being named after Gus... hope the happiness continues; thanks for the update!

Awww its sooo beautiful, so beautiful. I love this story I adore it. Once again I'd just like to give a little *nudge* that your not to do anything nasty like making him loose his babies like you did in one of your other stories....is this going to be a happy one? Is it? Pleeeeeeeease? I love the way you keep true to your characters, reading it, is like watching it unfurl before your eyes, like a well done play. It is brilliant. Please write more, I can't wait.

Hugs Aduial

Nice, cute and fluffy, i love the way they act around each other. How long is Gus going to be pregnant for? Is it like the nine months that everyone has or is it shorter? Just one little thing, you might want to make your chapters longer, they're very short unfortunatly, it would be really really nice if they were longer.

However I still love this story and you do update regularly so its not half as frustrating as with stories that take ages to update and have short chapters. Anyway you keep your characters true and I love the way Gus keeps scheming away and is actually attracted to Kellan. THanks for the update.

Hugs

Really liked the tone of this chapter and the information and how Gustin and Kellan communicated with each other. This line was hilarious too:

"Sure. Help. Whatever. C'mere."

Gustin gets horny too XD Thanks for the update!!

I like Adotre and hope we get to see him happy with his new mate before Gustin and Kellan leave, which I'm also looking forward to; thanks for the update!

talk about interruptions

OMG, latest chapter blew me away. lots of stuff i didnt see coming. i like that you are revealing more and more about the other species currently inhabiting earth. you did a awesome job of characterizing adotre. love the fic!

I am completely confused but I'm sure you will explain everything next ch. Adotre was so sad in this one. I felt real sorry for him and Kus was such an ass to him this time.

Oi! Didn't see that coming, with Adotre! Quite unexpected that that was his relationship with Kellan... but exciting - I hope we'll get to see some of what happens to him with that new wolfe. All updates are greeted with joy of course. And I'm wondering if this will tie in with characters familiar from your other stories at any point (don't remember if the time frame allows for it, but still), which pack Kellan and Gustin will approach, and how they will react. I like that this story is growing so plotty. Thanks for writing and posting!