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by jenner84

person tf
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see that Kellan and Gus have made friends; Kellan's protectiveness and Adotre wanting Gus's blessing was sweet; thanks for the update!
person Josie
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bara-pah-padah, I'm lovin' it!
I really am, and I want more now, instantly, yesterday! Sorry, that's ungrateful, but I love it so much I can't wait, ok?! ´:)
I thought we'd get to see Iorir and Adotre mate when they met, but this was a rather short chapter and I guess there will be formalities first, then. *squirms in seat* Thanks a mill for writing and sharing your gorgeous stories!
Josie (1more_sickpuppy on Livejournal)
person Jetfire
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww soo cute. I think I prefer Kellan to Iorir though. Still love this story. It just keeps getting better and better. Specially loved hte pornographic soap. Thanks for that!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww soo cute!
person jenner84
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is anyone else having problems with spacing? Because when I look at the story, it spaces just fine on my screen. I'm wondering if this is a formatting thing, or an individual screen thing.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please make spaces between paragraphs.

Interesting content. Good work.

KD
person tf
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adotre's actions were very cute; nice to see his mate cares; thanks for the update!
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
but things aren't going to be peaceful for long, are they?
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gosh, Adotre did it again. he had me chuckling the whole time he was describing the egg laying process. That was a bit too much TMI, I completely felt for Gus in that one.
person Rosei
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 "Cutting Soap"

Great chapter!!! Lots of heart!!! Lots of interesting stuff!!!
Love all that info about Layers and about Adotre's past.
Love Adotre!!! Who wouldn't?!!! You write him sooo sweet!!!
Love your sense of humor and sensitivity!!!

Thanks,
R