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uuuuppppppppdddddddddaaaaaaatttttttttteeeee please?

Seems that Kellan has started to come back to himself from the heat. It seems that the whole truth about what is going on is coming to him; having a mate and possibly a litter while being out in the woods. If he was exiled will his family allow him back? Will they take pity on him since he has Gustin and let them come back? Can't wait to hear what happened to lead to Kellan's exile. If it wasn't him that killed someone why did he take the exile? Was he protecting Isdate? Keep up the great work, love the story.

littleolmee
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Thank you for updating!

i love this story! so he took the blame for Ideste...ahhhh!

Yeah the mating season! I have been waiting for this. It was everything I wanted and more. I thought it was very good now to see what happens next;kits perhaps?

This Kellan sounds alot like Marik, are they the same?!

Not sure if I've missed it, but curious about why he's exiled and what'll happen when the alpha discovers he's mated with Gus.

I'm really enjoying the world you've created for your fics; very unique; I haven't seen anything like it before; is there some basis for it or somewhere I could find something similar since you've definitely inspired an interest; thanks!

wow, loved the chapter. What a way for Gus to become a mate though, having to deal with a heat right off. I was surprised he didn't seem to bothered by the change, but I guess Kellan must have explained it at sometime since he had the herbs for him. It's a good thing they had them, it also seemed to make it easier for Gus to deal with the mating since he had some pain relief. So this is a turning point for them isn't it? What difference will it make since Kellan bit him and took him as a real mate; the way he would a female of his kind, not just a male human mate? Keep up the great work, love the stories!

i was just about to go to bed when i decided to check and see if anything new had been posted. Glad i did.

Hi,

Wow! Great new chapter. I also liked that you go more into detail about the Change. So, is there an outer manifestation of female sex organs? I always assumed that the outside stayed the same, but the inside changed - kind of like the manga Sex Pistols.