rate_review Reviews

First of all... thanks a billion for the dedication, it was really sweet of you. :)
Now on to reviewing... what can I say? I love it! I like the way you describe the action scenes and the way the characters interact with each other. I find Ariano's character very amusing and the dialogue in the beginning with his brother Tavo was priceless, a comic relief between all the action scenes. I too want to find out how Ariano will work things out with someone half humanoid half octopus. Waiting for your next instalment. :)

Suzie

Personally, I like long chapters so If you want to make yours longer, it's fine by me! :) I enjoyed this first one a lot and I have to say that at one point I felt as if I was actually watching a sci-fi movie. I'm a sucker for science fiction stories and this one seems like it's going to be a very very good one. I can't comment more on characters or the plot (although the action scenes were very well described) as I've only read the first chapter, but I can tell you that I'm already hooked and I will be waiting for your updates! :)

Suzie