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by sagewhistler

person Perona
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm I think I can see where this cabin by the lake scenario is headed and I like it :D
Drew is so sneaky, poor Chay, but at least it's good sex. Can't wait for more!!
person Kylee
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter sagewhistler. Drew is lucky that he does not have to deal with his dad everyday. It is no wonder that Drew is so good at plotting his moves. He has plenty of practice navigating around his control freak of a father. I admire Drew for dealing with him so well. I love how the story is going. I am so eager for the next chapter.
person Mint
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY is cute! Update asap..
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Drew's father seems like such a douche. And he's on his fourth wife but completely forgot about Drew's mom, what a fuck.

I don't wanna know what he'll do if (or when) he finds out about Drew. Take away his trust fund or something...
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Drew. I can't imagine having to go thru life doing what's "expected" of me, knowing that what I'm doing isn't b/c I WANT to do it, but b/c it's expected. That's so sad. I hope eventually he'll tell his friends what's going on, altho even in today's times, there are those who will shun him.

Excellent chapter. I can imagine that Chay isn't feeling happy to return Drew's text. I would think he'd be feeling ashamed at what he let himself get into the night before. (even if he couldn't really or didn't want to stop it. lol)

Can't wait for more! :)
person Mint
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! This story is addictin, and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I noticed you update slowly since this started in 07. Great writin, darling!
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is addicting! The student being the forceful one in the relationship is interesting. However I hope that you make sure to get the gravity of the situation correct. I'm in school to become a teacher and if all goes according to plan I will be a teacher before I'm even able to legally drink. So I really connect with Chay, but the consequences of these kinds of actions are a horrible. So I hope that it works out.
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, I knew this was coming. The bestfriend always knows...
person elegantenvy
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooo love this story. While I love reading the story through Chay's perspective it was nice to get a peek into Drew's brain for a change--I think it gave me some important insights into his character, more than just an over-bearing sex-crazed teen. Anyway, love Drew and Chay <3 Can't wait for more
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohohoh....that was good...even though chey wasn't in it...but i do like seme's better so no biggie. Either way, it's nice to see more of how drew thinks. it gives helps us define and understand his personality better./ and makes it so that the story is not only about sex...though i doubt anyone would mind if it was only about sex ;)