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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13
I suppose I'm in the minority here but frankly I think Andrew's getting what he deserves. He might lose his status as popular jock, but so what? Maybe now he might start feeling a fraction of the anxiety he's putting Chayton through, who's suffering the very real threat of not only losing his reputation, but of any real job prospects if anyone were to find out what's been happening.
I suppose I'm in the minority here but frankly I think Andrew's getting what he deserves. He might lose his status as popular jock, but so what? Maybe now he might start feeling a fraction of the anxiety he's putting Chayton through, who's suffering the very real threat of not only losing his reputation, but of any real job prospects if anyone were to find out what's been happening.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, poor Drew. Everything's just falling apart. I'm curious to see how this meeting with Chay and Drew is going to go. Keep up the good writing!
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the added plot element you added and can't wait to see what you do with this.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I never read the original so Gabriel turning out to be a total backstabbing sack of shit wasn't a surprise to me. His attitude at the gym a couple of chapters back alluded to him being a potential antagonist in this story. And seriously, he needs to get a fucking life if he's been plotting Drew's downfall for years. Seems a bit mental. o_O
I'm actually glad that Drew is having this crisis of sorts. A lot of slash stories have only the bottom/uke struggling with difficulties in their life whereas the top/seme has an easy life free of conflicts and the only thing he has to deal with is getting the uke in his bed. Having Drew outted by his (ex-)best friend and afraid of the imminent reactions of his classmates gives his character more depth. He's got more going on in his life than just trying to bed Chay, though that's how it has been until now. I like this because in a way Chay and Drew are now on a more level playing field. Just a bit. Before, Drew was on the attack without a care in the world, while Chay was the only one worrying about how badly this can end. But now that this roadblock has appeared in Drew's life, it will force him to be cautious of what he does from now on, or at least I hope this sobered him up, because he was incredibly reckless with that stunt he pulled in the classroom. I really wanted to kick him the junk for that. >:(
I also wanted to say how refreshing it is to see a top/jock that is 100% gay. In all of the slash stories I've read that involve a jock, they are essentially bisexual, because, like Drew, they dated girls to play the role of straight macho man, but unlike Drew, they actually had sex with their girlfriends. These guys reveal that they're gay to the object of their affection/lust, but they still managed to get it up for a female, so I say they're bisexual with a preference for guys. But Drew, wow, he never slept with ANY of them, which means he cannot get aroused by a woman at all and is genuinely gay. I was so surprised, but in a good way. It's so nice to see that you're writing a jock story that's different from the norm. ;)
I didn't leave a comment for Ch.10, but I'll say it here that if I were a gay man, I would be very worried if Henry Robinson was my doctor. Yikes, what an asshole. I'm not saying he'd risk ruining his career over a gay man in a malpractice lawsuit or something, but I would imagine that he wouldn't try as hard when treating a gay patient, thus they would not be getting the best care possible. >:( And I'm surprised Dr. Robinson still has money to throw around (e.g. buying a massive diamond ring for #4) after so many divorces. You'd think he'd be a lot less wealthy after dividing assets and with all of the alimony payments he likely has to fork over to his ex-wives. Unless he made them sign pre-nups. And I hate to be a wet blanket, but I have to say that it was pretty unprofessional of that waiter to flirt with a customer like that. I'm not saying he deserved the hostility Dr. Robinson dished out, but it certainly was unwise of him to hit on a guy when he's a waiter at a restaurant, not a gay bar.
I look forward to the next update. :)
I'm actually glad that Drew is having this crisis of sorts. A lot of slash stories have only the bottom/uke struggling with difficulties in their life whereas the top/seme has an easy life free of conflicts and the only thing he has to deal with is getting the uke in his bed. Having Drew outted by his (ex-)best friend and afraid of the imminent reactions of his classmates gives his character more depth. He's got more going on in his life than just trying to bed Chay, though that's how it has been until now. I like this because in a way Chay and Drew are now on a more level playing field. Just a bit. Before, Drew was on the attack without a care in the world, while Chay was the only one worrying about how badly this can end. But now that this roadblock has appeared in Drew's life, it will force him to be cautious of what he does from now on, or at least I hope this sobered him up, because he was incredibly reckless with that stunt he pulled in the classroom. I really wanted to kick him the junk for that. >:(
I also wanted to say how refreshing it is to see a top/jock that is 100% gay. In all of the slash stories I've read that involve a jock, they are essentially bisexual, because, like Drew, they dated girls to play the role of straight macho man, but unlike Drew, they actually had sex with their girlfriends. These guys reveal that they're gay to the object of their affection/lust, but they still managed to get it up for a female, so I say they're bisexual with a preference for guys. But Drew, wow, he never slept with ANY of them, which means he cannot get aroused by a woman at all and is genuinely gay. I was so surprised, but in a good way. It's so nice to see that you're writing a jock story that's different from the norm. ;)
I didn't leave a comment for Ch.10, but I'll say it here that if I were a gay man, I would be very worried if Henry Robinson was my doctor. Yikes, what an asshole. I'm not saying he'd risk ruining his career over a gay man in a malpractice lawsuit or something, but I would imagine that he wouldn't try as hard when treating a gay patient, thus they would not be getting the best care possible. >:( And I'm surprised Dr. Robinson still has money to throw around (e.g. buying a massive diamond ring for #4) after so many divorces. You'd think he'd be a lot less wealthy after dividing assets and with all of the alimony payments he likely has to fork over to his ex-wives. Unless he made them sign pre-nups. And I hate to be a wet blanket, but I have to say that it was pretty unprofessional of that waiter to flirt with a customer like that. I'm not saying he deserved the hostility Dr. Robinson dished out, but it certainly was unwise of him to hit on a guy when he's a waiter at a restaurant, not a gay bar.
I look forward to the next update. :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
::Squeeeeeeeeeeels:: i was hoping you'd keep a rendition of the classroom scene XD loved this, and i look forward to more ;)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soo much. Please update soon. I love Chay and Drew.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Drew better be careful with the chances he's taking or someone's gonna find out. That being said, very steamy kiss can't wait for more :D
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you've updated! Oh gosh, I can't explain how hot this chapter was. I absolutely love the chemistry Drew and Chay have when their together; although I’m slightly afraid of Drew's complete disregard for Chay's profession. I just have this feeling it's all going to end badly. Someone's going to find out; Drew's not being discreet enough, and Chay...well, he's not making it any easier on himself anyway.
You’re doing an amazing job so far. Keep up the good writing!
You’re doing an amazing job so far. Keep up the good writing!
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! Thanks for the update. Poor Chay is going to be really stressed out if Drew does that kind of stuff at school. Stressed but excited at the same time. Maybe Chay needs to forget the denial and to try talking to Drew. I personally am enjoying the classroom harassment. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. And Happy Late B-day!
That was really hot piece! I'm feeling sorry for Chay and I also envy him to the boot. =)
Poor thing! And I can't blame Drew for wanting to master Chay, he just gives you those vibes. Darn, they were steaming! More, more, more... *drooling all over keyboard*
That was really hot piece! I'm feeling sorry for Chay and I also envy him to the boot. =)
Poor thing! And I can't blame Drew for wanting to master Chay, he just gives you those vibes. Darn, they were steaming! More, more, more... *drooling all over keyboard*