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person kylee123
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Drew found the braid! Oh my Goodness! This chapter was so steamy that I just about overheated while I was reading it. Drew and Chay are sizzling hot together. Chay was almost convinced that Drew was fooling around with him and the feeling of loss made him realize what he truly wanted deep down inside. I love the little braid play in this chapter. It kind of shows how Chay is already very aware of everything about Drew. I liked the way this chapter flowed. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Til Schweiger???? Really?? lol I just can't picture him as a dom, because everytime I try I see him in Manta, Manta. I know you probably just go for the looks, but still...
person Kinectic
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
@aditus I had never heard of Manta Manta so I looked it up. 1991 was a long time ago. Have you seen Til in Inglourious Bastards. He's been a badass for the last decade. I think he's redeemed himself a bit. :p
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can only hope the rest of the student body isn't as pig headed as Gabe. But if it is the case, it would be an excuse for Drew to get Chay to leave with him.
person kylee123
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a shock for Drew. I don't know how he will handle the rumors. He definitely is better off without that Gabriel. he seems to have been very obsessive to be dating Drew's ex girlfriends and questioning them. He has almost been spying on him. I guess Drew needs to decide if he wants to come out or to just ignore Gabriel's unfounded rumors. It definitely raises the suspense in the story. Now poor Drew can go to Chay for some much needed comfort XD
person kylee123
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think Drew is strong enought to come out at school and people would probably accept it very quickly. I don't think that he is ready to come out to his bigoted father though. That would be trouble.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems to me that Gabe's an ass. It seems like he's been jealous of Drew all along. Especially that comment about sloppy seconds. So, if a kid like this has been carrying around jealousy and hatred (?) all this time, who knows what he'll tell everyone at school.

Yep, I think by tomorrow, everyone will know about Drew. Altho Drew didn't actually come out and confirm it. lol

Poor Drew; can't wait to read about the fallout! :)
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find myself really wanting to read the original if Gregs response was good :(
now it feels like if chay gets coerced to being with drew it'd be sorta outta pity for being undoubtedly shun from his friends and maybe the entire school, and how long till it gets to his dad... Anyway looking forward to the new update, plus I'm wondering if you've got the original posted anywhere?
Please let me know if u have, my email is lil.miss.gg@hotmail.com
thanks.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I said Greg, I meant Gabe :S
person fudge
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how this all pans out!!