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by sagewhistler

schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. sooooo hot!!!! I appreciate your taking the time to make it enjoyable. This was a fine piece of smut! Me likes lots! *makes cookie batch! And offers them w/milk*
person faithsins
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:D
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I think Chay's gonna hate himself in the morning. But as long as we get to read about it, who cares? lol J/K

I feel bad for Chay; he can't seem to turn Drew away, not that Drew's making it easy. Oh no, I don't think he'll ever let Chay go! lol

I just hope Drew's wrong about the coach and Gabe. I hope Gabe knows how to keep his mouth shut. Omg, Gabe could be spying on Drew out of spite for Drew punching him. He could be following Drew around and he'll figure out Drew's secret and then Drew and Chay will be in big trouble. Actually Chay. As Chay said, he's the adult; even tho Drew is seducing him, Chay's the grown-up and he'll be the one taking the blame.

Awesome chapter! I hope none of what I'm thinking comes true! hahah :)
person lo
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would have liked to tension of the chase to be drawn out a bit but what you have is still good. I can't wait to see the drama unfold. Great work.
person Eremi22
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this fic since the first time you posted it all those ages ago, and I think a part of me misses the old Warren/Drew. He may have been diabolical, but he was deliciously diabolical c:

I only recently noticed, but Warren is such a villainous name... At any rate, I am super excited to finally see some action!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter... and oh my god, cannot wait for the next one
person fudge
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this!!!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Drew smiled reassuringly. 'You won’t regret this, baby.'" Oh Drew, you really shouldn't make promises like that. There is no guarantee he can keep that promise since he doesn't have absolute control over the situation and the consequences. As long as he and Chay are doing this, they run the risk of being found out, no matter how "careful" they are. But it seems they both think it's worth the gamble. Very foolish in my mind. They could have waited until Drew turned 18, then at least they wouldn't have to worry about a statutory rape charge. There's no changing the teacher/student problem (unless Chay quits his job), but at least there's no risk of prison for that infraction. Chay would not last long in prison. He would be treated like currency in there. Personally, I don't think an orgasm is worth all of this trouble, and that is what this all boils down to: an orgasm. Why else would they not wait, if they truly wanted a real relationship that's beyond sex?

Anyhoo, I'm very curious about the future direction of this story. Whether they are exposed and Chay faces the law, or whether no one finds out and they live happily ever after. Update again soon. :)
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a steamy chapter. I'm sort of excited that Chay is finally giving into Drew, but scared for them at the same time.

This story just gets better and better. Keep up the good writing.
person Mint
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job again! I luv. You need to work on some grammar, since some words are wrong. Please update asao