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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how the highschool is gonna react... Good luck writing the next chapter.
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just WOW!!! Such a great story here, I am truly impressed! Cannot wait for more from you!
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the tension and drama. I also like how the high school kid gets introspective.
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so far this story is really good. I was a little hesitant to start reading it because I figured Chay was still in the closet and didn't want to read that type of the story, but I was happily wrong^_^ So far I like both of the main characters. I like how Drew is so big and trying to butter up Chay. I don't think Chay even realizes it:) I also like the end statement on this chapter, about not being able to stay away. I think you flawlessly connected what his mom said to sparking a comment from Drew's thoughts. That could have seemed over done and obvious, but you pulled it off smoothly. Good job!I like how Chay is still kind of in student mode even though he's a teacher. ^_^I'm interested to see what happens next. You took the cliche student/teacher relationship and seem to be putting a new, more interesting spin on it!Hurrah
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Chay. He is so being played:) He doesn't even realize it. Drew so wants him:) Drew's rather crafty though. Really good! I'm excited to see what happens next.
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Drew!He's so devious, yet it seems to come so naturally to him. Are we ever going to figure out why he isn't messing around with Jeremy anymore? Did Jeremy move away or did they just get bored with one another? Not a big deal, but I'm curious.:) Also, I love Jeremy's comment about Drew being cocky and how there's a difference. That was an amazing line^_^So glad that I decided to give this story a try. It is kick ass. It feels natural and you have good, interesting dialogue and characters. I wonder if Chay will ever look back and realize how Drew had him wrapped around his finger from day one. Great job! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please Sagewhistler. I can't handle the suspense.
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Guh, that was too hot for words! This story just gets better and better.
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see the latest chapter. Now that was hot! It is good to see Drew allowing Chay to take things slow. I love seeing Chay become so submissive to Drew. Lovely. The story is coming along very nicely I reread chapter 13 and I spotted a few typo since you are editing - mostly missing words:
Shrugging off Drew’s hand was a bad idea. That big hand only landed on his thigh; the long fingers curled *around his * possessively around it. Chay struggled to breathe without a hitch.
Chay ** to shield his crotch, to hide his shame—his weakness of the flesh, but Drew was one step ahead of him. The blond pinned Chay’s hands against the couch by the wrists and dipped his head to swirl his tongue across the head of Chay’s cock.
Shrugging off Drew’s hand was a bad idea. That big hand only landed on his thigh; the long fingers curled *around his * possessively around it. Chay struggled to breathe without a hitch.
Chay ** to shield his crotch, to hide his shame—his weakness of the flesh, but Drew was one step ahead of him. The blond pinned Chay’s hands against the couch by the wrists and dipped his head to swirl his tongue across the head of Chay’s cock.