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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is awesome! Poor Chay, I hope he takes his friends advice to "man up" as it were. You've created really strong characters here, update soon! I really wanna see where this goes.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kind of feel bad for Chay...^.^ keep updating
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
evil evil cliffiee!!!! *wails*
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, okay. I like this one way too much :x No idea why, but I do.
And I was rather disappointed to find it end HERE of all places D: Where the good stuff is happening. That's just cruel :c
YOU. WRITE MORE. :3
And I was rather disappointed to find it end HERE of all places D: Where the good stuff is happening. That's just cruel :c
YOU. WRITE MORE. :3
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!!! THis is so great!!!!! but gah!! another cliffhanger!!! Update soon!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great plot! Your writing makes me feel as if I were actually there. Please keep the story going :)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Don't be so selfish! Share with me! Update this wonderfully great story and share it with me, please!!
I'm really liking this story! Update it soon!
I'm really liking this story! Update it soon!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw! I want more! don't leave use with a cliff hanger!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bambi4real 2007-03-19
I don't think I have read a similar premise. I mean with the adult being the Uke to the aggressive 17 yr. old. I think i like this would love to read more. Oh I caught in the last ch at the beginning when they were talking about throwing out the food for dinner if Chay didn't stay, you wrote 'through' when you meant 'throw'. Not a biggie.
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I don't think I have read a similar premise. I mean with the adult being the Uke to the aggressive 17 yr. old. I think i like this would love to read more. Oh I caught in the last ch at the beginning when they were talking about throwing out the food for dinner if Chay didn't stay, you wrote 'through' when you meant 'throw'. Not a biggie.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
madlodger 2007-03-19
CHAPTER 3Hi, Diabolique,This story is really something:) I love it. I like the idea and both characters. Nice detail on character's background and looks, not overwelming, but just enough to let know what is going on. The man is a teacher and an indian, wow! The kiss scene was very hot :D Chay's reaction seems very natural and the dialogue is very much realistic. Good job!I wonder about who Kevin is, he is not from the reservation, I beleive. Must be a friend from school or something.I would like to admit that I passed this story a few times without reading because of summary. The summary doesn't do this story justice. You need to post more warnings also, besides WIP. M/M and Slash, at least. This fic is a nice surprize and I hope to see more of it:)Thank you!
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CHAPTER 3Hi, Diabolique,This story is really something:) I love it. I like the idea and both characters. Nice detail on character's background and looks, not overwelming, but just enough to let know what is going on. The man is a teacher and an indian, wow! The kiss scene was very hot :D Chay's reaction seems very natural and the dialogue is very much realistic. Good job!I wonder about who Kevin is, he is not from the reservation, I beleive. Must be a friend from school or something.I would like to admit that I passed this story a few times without reading because of summary. The summary doesn't do this story justice. You need to post more warnings also, besides WIP. M/M and Slash, at least. This fic is a nice surprize and I hope to see more of it:)Thank you!
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