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For the love of all that is holy....please update!!
I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!

Hi Sagewhistler. I hope you are still working on this story. I hope to see it either here at AFF or in published format soon. It is such a good story.

This story is so good,please upload soon.It has been over 2 moths since you last uploaded:(

Sagewhistler! I hope everything is going well for you. I am glad that Crush has been restored and I hope to see a new chapter soon. The story is going so well.

I think it panned out good^_^ I like that it was dubious consent rather than non-con. I would have gladly read it either way, but I think this way leads to more character development and a more stable relationship. He let Chay choose in the end and while Chay may still have reservations about the relationship I think it will be easier for him to accept and feel more secure with Drew this way.:) Poor Drew though. He lost his best friend. I guess it wasn't much of a loss, considering, but still, he has known Gabe since he was little. It has to hurt just a little deep down. Chay will make it worth it for him though^_^ Good dialogue and description. It all feels natural and you're pulling off the d/s aspect beautifully. Some people try, but it just doesn't work for them. They don't include any of the thoughts, only actions. Anyway, really good job!

I enjoyed it!:)It was sexy, cute, and amazing all at the same time. I have read other sex scenes lately, but they didn't seem to really have any feeling behind them. They were just actions and noises. But, yours seemed more than that so super good job! I liked how they talked a little and how we got some background on how Chay had always wanted to try this. Kind of makes you excited for him:)

Oh, that was an evil place to stop at:) How is he going to tell everyone on his own terms? This could get messy. ^_^I'm glad that Hank was understanding though. He'll at least have one friend then^_^Also, I'm glad you explained why Hank was supportive. I probably wouldn't have questioned it if you hadn't, but I think that adds believability to the story. Oh, and I didn't mention this before because it's not really important, but I went to a small high school and it wouldn't have looked weird if a teacher hung out with the same sex student outside of class. I had a young female teacher and she had girls come to her house, she went to this museum with them, she added them on facebook, and she acted like one of their friends. I thought it was kind of weird, but I blamed it on the fact that she missed high school and had the emotional maturity of a high school girl. So while some people may kind of scoff or think it was weird that Drew went to Chay's house and went to his classroom often I think they could get away with it without suspicion. However, when Drew comes out gay that might change things up a little. It may also be different considering Chay is single and the teacher I was talking about was married. I just thought that might be some cool information for you just in case people were saying your story wasn't believable or if you didn't want Chay to lose his job because they got caught^_^Great chapter!I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Oh no! His friend may be catching on. I wonder how Gabe would react if he knew what was going on. Right now he just seems hurt that Drew isn't telling him when they're best friends, but I don't know how he'd feel about the truth. Drew says he doesn't care about other's opinions but I think he may be a little hurt if Gabe ditched him because he was gay. Good job!

-panics- No! Where's the 'next' button??? That's it? I ate up sixteen chapters in less than three hours??? -flops in despair- That's as excellent a theory as any, Andrew...but what are you gonna do? Streak around at a pep rally yelling out his confession or something-? Hey wait...if he told the truth and still played it off as a joke, no one would believe Gabriel, now would they? In any case, I can't wait to see what he has in mind.

Yay! Thanks for the new chapter sagewhistler. One of the things I love about the story is how Drew can go from being a hot dominant to being an unsure teenager through the course of his day. I get to admire him and then feel sorry for him in the same chapter. I am glad that Hank was supportive to him and I would bet that a lot of the other kids will not care too much either. I admire Drew for deciding to face up to Gabriel's rumors. I think it will look pretty spiteful of Gabriel to be mouthing off these rumors - especially since Drew will not be walking around with a boyfriend anytime soon. The one person I worry about is Drew's father. I hope he does not find out because I know he will not react well to rumors about his son being gay. I am so nervous about how this will turn out for Drew. Good luck with your computer. I know that can be a pain when they are not working.