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TT^TT they cut off my review...::twitch:: well anywaaaaaaaaaaay i can't wait to see what happens ^^ ... evil EVIL cliffy though ::pout::

I had to look up queue because I had no idea what it was. I figured you meant a certain hair tie or ribbon, but after finding out what queue meant ("a tail of hair, either of the natural hair when so worn or of a wig, plaited together and tied with ribbon, hanging down the back of the neck") I can't help but visualize a clip-on braid on Chay and it just looks/sounds so awkward when thinking about it! XD; I'm not sure if this was what you were going for, as in the hairstyle, but I thought I'd just let you know? Since I went to three sources (dictionary.com, 1911encyclopedia.org, and wikipediar.org) and they all say the same thing. BUT! To get over the nitpicking, I LOVE this story. :DDDD It's just all kinds of hot and wrong and slightly sadistic. I hope Warren doesn't end up being a crazed, hormonal stalker though....... D: Never seen the movie or heard about it. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Chay, give in to your urgings! Only some odd more months and he'll be legal! *bricked* :DDDv

Wow i realy like this fic! Its the first time i read a student/pupil one.. I can't wait till the next chap!! ^^ hot!

CHAPTER 4
This story is definetely hot and is getting hotter. It was inspired by the movie, but is much better already. Not even because it's slash, but because of overall storyline and tension. I like the fact that Warren is not 14. That sort of ruined the movie for me, to be honest.17.5 is much better, he is almost an adult but stil is a teenager. 14 y.o. as a sexy fiend don't hold as much of impact as 17.5 y.o. would. It is plauseable that Chay may like him, he is only 24, after all. Yeah, this fic is definetely better than a movie.

I respect the fact that you keep working on chapters untill they are good. It's a sigh of a good writer. I wondered if that's what you study at school, because of a way things are described and bits of valuble info inserted in the story. It was carefully planned out, yeah. Good job.

So, is it Iko-Iko songfic? Hahaha! Just kidding! But listen to more Iko-Iko at 3:00am, please:) Whatever is working, hehe.

uh, the story is soo intense!
I like it a LOT
keep updating please :)

Just came across your story. Veeeeerrrrrry nice. Can't wait for more.

Damn I was just getting all into it only to find out that was the last chapter. Update soon please!

You have me hanging on the edge of my seat for every new installment of this story!! I absolutely love it, please please update soon!

I remember reading this story before I just never connected you to diabolique. I really liked it. I don't however recall reading it to the end. I never really thought of a 17 yr old as the dominant type but you make it sound believable. I think the way Warren talks is really hot and the last ch had me perking up at 4am. Kudos! One typo really stood out for me it was the "Accept..." at the end. I think you meant to say "Except..."

normally i dont really like nonconcensual stuff, but this is good. i shall be waiting eagerly for the next update.
yay! ear fetish!