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Yeah an update, and a hot one too! I have been waiting forever for you to update this and it was definitely worth it. I think the two are so hot together however there was a line in there that had me step back from the story for a minute. It was where you had written " he was a man of his word" I mean it seemed more appropriate to say a boy of his word!LOL!

I do so love stories about obsessive love. Warren is one twisted kid, and I like where you're going with him. He's spoiled and generally loved and revered by everyone in town so it doesn't leave Chay with a whole lot of choices. Creepy, but...hot. I can't wait for more!

Lol. You can't rape the willing. :D:P:)

I know you have a lot of work, so please update this when you can! I'm already imagining all the naughty things that Warren can do to Chay *omg drool* lol. Good luck!

Okay, I have a dominance fetish. I've made peace with it, and go so far as to embrace it warmly when it visits and invite it in for tea and rope tying. But, maybe it's me, Warren seems a little crazy. maybe it's a combination of the circumstances and his age/maturity, but he doesn't seem to be simply giving off the alpha male vibe of some of your other characters. Then again, it may be because Chay's actually struggling and not simply being sulky or defiant. Who knows, but it occured to me.

Chay has pretty hair and it should never be pulled except in the practice of rough play when his partner is gripping the back of it, near his scalp, to move his head a particular way(baring of neck, pulling back to get kiss if position demands, etc.). It should NOT be used like a tassel in flag football to get your "opponent" on the ground, BAD Warren!
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Please add on a new chapter soon, i wanna see what Warren was doing!! xD

Please add on a new chapter soon, i wanna see what Warren was doing!! xD

I can't stand the name Warren but I like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

An upda.....::slumps:: TT^TT had my hopes up and everything! ::pouts:: Am still in love with this story, and really want to know what happens next. pretty please?

Just finished rereading this...LOVE <3333 i love all of your stories, but this one is my favorite...which is why the wait is killing me......evil EVIL cliffy...::pout::