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by sagewhistler

person jeane
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I lov thi story its really sexy but it looks like you dont update very often... Please update soon i really want togethersee what happens to chay and ren!
person Pierette
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just noticed that at some point you had a break of almost a year between postings!O_0 I hope you won't make us wait that long for the next chapter... You've found a big fan in me:)
person Pierette
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is great, just love the characters! Can't wait for the next chapter:)
person Pierette
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a fast one, Thank you! Ren is great - scary, yet so hot. And Chay is a whimp but an absolutely adorable one! Hope for some more Ren-Chay one-on-one soon:)
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree a hundred percent they do make a sexy pair being such extremes. I also liked the scene in the bathroom because I thought for sure he would explode or at the very least slap her back. But when he didn't, I also thought it was clever because he didn't care about her and to react with a slap or extreme emotion would imply some level of feeling or connectedness that for his character shouldn't be there for anyone but Chay.
person Darkmatter
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Another update so soon! No Chay this time though. :( and yes, I think they make a perfect pair too!
person au
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and things thicken :D i really really like this. hope to see more soon ::runs off to reread::
person geo
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding? I love Ren and Chay! They are so good together, even if Chay doesn't know it yet! Please Update, I am now officially a big fan :D
person Kiki
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Ren's obsession seems to develop too quickly and too intense but overall, I still enjoy reading this. On a side note, I was watching The Lost Boys the other day, and now I keep on picturing Billy Wirth, who played Dwayne, as Chayton. Amazingly enough I didn't think anything when I was watching him in War Party. Go figure... :P
person Niiro
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've made my day...er...night(its 1:12am, so morning)....this story is awesome!!

I read the first 3 chapters(I think) quite a long time ago, and surprise, surprise, I still remember it!!

I cannot wait for you to update this!! I will be bookmarking this on my computer!! I just adore Chay!!

Its not often authors make a main character native american(and a natural bottem, too!!). Anyhow, update soon!! Even tho I kinda feel like Ren's a...bit too aggressive, but I LOVE HIM AND HIS TACTICS!! Can't wait to read more!!

It's '09, so don't keep me waiting long!!