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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
even though you haven't updated in a while, I wanted to let you know that this story has not been forgotten! i am still very fon of it, and I still eagerly await its next installment
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story soo much! The characters are amazing. Writer's block sucks. Hope you ride it out soon, can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, writer's block sucks. Ren is so mean to poor Chay, I'd hate to see the day he got mad at him. And Chay's situation just seems so helpless, that I cringe each time he 's left with little to no actions to stop Ren. This chapter was hilarious: cramps! My god! I was dying when he exclaimed that to the girls lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey its already bin a couple of days when r u going to update. story is getting good please dont leave us hanging
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yaaay! I'm soo happy to see this story updated. And even more so that you promised another one tomorrow! Your a great writer, cant wait for more!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love how sexy this story is! I usual
don't like reading stories like this where the
older dude is the submissive type. But this story
is wow... I hope you update soon!
don't like reading stories like this where the
older dude is the submissive type. But this story
is wow... I hope you update soon!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha!!! What a great story! I just started reading it. Poor Chay! I was at the edge of my seat, a few times, worried that someone would come into the teacher's bathroom, that someone would notice Ren and his hand job. Extremely amusing! Can't wait for your next update!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am just at chapter 3 but I am really enjoying Crush so far. Poor Chay doesn't seem to stand a chance at resisting Ren. Thanks for sharing this great story.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fun story. I'm digging the characters so far.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I love Ren. He is so very naughty and sexy at the same time. I can't wait for them to ditch those girls and arrive at the cabin. Let the fun begin! I caught one line in Chapter 9 "Ren was wearing shades and a ball cap, his hair braided and tucked into his jacket when Chay pulled up in his midnight blue Mustang." Should it be Ren pulling up in his Mustang? Other than that, the tension between the two characters is sizzling. I also loved the bathroom scene.