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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love chapter 3. I am excited to see what happens at dinner. I can understand how lonely Chay is and how that makes it harder to resist temptation.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This sounds just like a story I read a year or so ago. But it started out differently, where the kid next door saw Chay moving into his new house, something like that.
Anyway, I think I like this start better! lol
Looking foward to the next chapter!
Anyway, I think I like this start better! lol
Looking foward to the next chapter!
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see this story again. I remember reading it last year and I just loved it. I am excited to read more of it. I really liked Clayton/Chay's character and Ren/Andrew too. I would suggest that instead of summarizing the painting visit to Clayton's house, you show it in a little more present detail. Since the story is just starting, it would be a good chance to build up some chemistry between Drew and Clayton and give out some info. I am very eager to read the other chapters.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD YOU UPDATED/REVAMPED THE HELL OUT OF THIS STORY! IT IS SO AMAZING. I remember the first version because I used to obsessively refresh everyday. I really like this updated version, it's got all of the elements I liked amplified x100. And done by new year's you say?! Man, happy new year! :D
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this story again! I loved the original, but I'm also liking the rewrite too. Look forward to see their relationship develop. :)
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ewwww, smoking when poor Andrew was trying to eat? That house must reek! Yuk. Ugg, my mother used to do that; smoke and stir the food. Gross.
I'm liking this version more and more! lol Love the fact that Andrew "saved" the day and he and his friends were able to help Chay out.
Can't wait to read more! :)
I'm liking this version more and more! lol Love the fact that Andrew "saved" the day and he and his friends were able to help Chay out.
Can't wait to read more! :)
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey :)
I just thought I'd stop by and Cheer you on :D I hope things are going well with Crush and look forward to reading it whenever you manage to publish it :)
I just thought I'd stop by and Cheer you on :D I hope things are going well with Crush and look forward to reading it whenever you manage to publish it :)
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to hear that you've decided to do this :) I love all your stories, but Crush was one of my aboslute favorites. I've bought everything you've published to date and have enjoyed them so much. I hope you conintue to find joy in writing and sharing your stories with us =D
P.S.
Did i tell you i squelled when you gave a tentative publication date for Crush *_______* and July of 2010 no less!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That so made my night :)
P.S.
Did i tell you i squelled when you gave a tentative publication date for Crush *_______* and July of 2010 no less!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That so made my night :)
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to hear that you are still writing this story! I was afraid that you had given up on it. I really like this story, it was so well written and the storyline was fascinating. I can't wait to read it in its completed form. Good luck on your writing and thank you for continuing the story!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I almost had a heart attack when I saw this story lined up in the queue (sp?) again lol. Though it was just a note from you, I was still quite happy to see that you plan on continuing Crush, cant wait! Also just left a note for you on "monster" since I just found it through clicking your bio. Also, could you give your fans a link to where we can buy your published fiction? I'm a poor post-grad and try not to spend money on books, but there are a few authors I make exceptions for, and your one of'em! :-)