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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! This chapter made me so excited. I think that Chay is definitely a submissive and Drew is for sure a dominant. I think that Chay is missing home and feeling lonely. Having a dominant around will for sure fill that need for security in him. Even if his dom is a 17 year old student. I think that will really spice up the story. Love it.
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I did find one typo at the beginning:
But, she kissed me and I felt cold. It felt wrong.” Chay plucked a movie at random from the box and turned it over and over in * her * hands.
But, she kissed me and I felt cold. It felt wrong.” Chay plucked a movie at random from the box and turned it over and over in * her * hands.
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lOVED the chapter... please continue. i'm in love with this story...
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. It's very well-written, and easy to read. I'm also loving your main character, Chay. He seems like a real cutie pie. I've never seen a fic where the younger character was the dom, but I'm curious to see how this will play out. I'm also a little afraid for Chay, because he could get into serious trouble if people start noticing how close he and Drew are getting.
Keep up the good writing.
Keep up the good writing.
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this story! too good! my god, i can't wait till the big guy makes a move. it's getting to be very very very interesting. please update soon.
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work , love it so far and looking forward for more \(*3*)/
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"'Cept maybe you." Wow. That line gave me chills. How perceptive of Drew.
Awesome coupla chapters (had to catch up!) Love the banter between the two; Chay seems to be warming up to Drew more and more.
Can't wait for more! :)
Awesome coupla chapters (had to catch up!) Love the banter between the two; Chay seems to be warming up to Drew more and more.
Can't wait for more! :)
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute little story. Not much has happened, but I myself have a weakness for attractive native american men so I understand this. lol. great job and hope to read more soon :)
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I was a bit apprehensive about Reading it first because u started it in 2007 n I was like how likely are regular updates gonna be? But then I couldn't not read it because I love taboo storys n teacher student dynamics r always good to read. Haven't read anythin by u before but love your style, I'll look forward to ur updates, but pls keep them regular :)
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chay is such a sweetheart. He doesn't want to turn his back on Drew now that Drew has chosen to share his secret. At least he knows now that the perceived flirting from Drew is probably the real thing. I am eager to see how he will handle it now.