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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wonderful writing. I agree with kixx. The depth of Ronald's pain and loneliness is so apparent...and it gives something to the plot. Please keep up up the good work ^^...and continue with this wonderful story.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's got a good plot to it, good detail too. Aside from a few spelling and grammatical errors it is really well written. Update soon--I want to see where this is going! (^_^)