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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this keeps getting better and better!!! hope you update soon!!!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good luck!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you have here. A good story doesn't need the racey stuff to start off with. So far, I like it. Unfortunately I get the feeling that Bea has jumped out of the frying pan and into the fire, so to speak.
I look forward to reading more.
I look forward to reading more.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story seems very interesting, I cant wait to see where your going with this. I like Crowley's character, he seems very mysterious. Great chapter, update soon please :)!!!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. ^^
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short, but interesting.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good! hope you update soon!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The setting is dark, brooding and just reeks of something out of "The Hills Have Eyes"...
...Well, for me, anyway.
It was a well-written chapter, and your imagery of the house was excellent. Keep up the good work!
...Well, for me, anyway.
It was a well-written chapter, and your imagery of the house was excellent. Keep up the good work!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good stuff, is this guy some kinda skin? not the racist i hope. he sounds fuckin hot. i loveeeee it :] cant wait to read more
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter in a great story!