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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally, some action between Crowly and Beatrice...anyways, hope you update soon!
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...i really like this story.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6. interesting story, i can't wait to read more. update soon
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, i really think that the falshbacks help develop the characther!! good as always, can't wait to read more!!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O her dad was such a douche!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really moving. Well anyways keep writing, it's a really good story :)
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like the flashback at the end; it really helps develop the characters further. As far as plot is concerned, you're doing pretty well! It's interesting and you always get the feeling that there's something more coming just around the bend. Keep it up!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're doing great so far. Just feel your story out. I like whats happening to them.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Crowley is pretty sharp on his toes. I'm glad Beatrice's dad did put up a fight for her, he's a big jerk face! >_<. Good story build up, i really like it.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it's really good and well written. Can't wait to read more!!