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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..i love this...keep it up
one of my favs already
one of my favs already
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was written very well. It definitely got me going, there's no doubt about that. ^_^ The end totally blew me away with surprise. Haha. Loved it.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shocking. I actually like this one better than Welcome Home. Maybe it's because I can relate more to this one, who knows? Wonderful job on portraying the emotions of the main character, and kudos for the surprise at the end.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. What a twist at the end. I like your writing style. Keep 'em coming!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I don't know about angst, but I don't know much about angst anyway.
On your story, though, I thought it was a great premise and you expressed your character's point of view and her emotions very well.
Good job! Keep up the good work!
On your story, though, I thought it was a great premise and you expressed your character's point of view and her emotions very well.
Good job! Keep up the good work!