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for The pro and cons of life

by cohe

person Janine
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey du,

ich mag den zweiten Teil, auch wenn ich finde, dass sich das erste Kapitel ein wenig besser lesen ließ. Kann aber auch an meiner Tagesverfassung liegen. ;)

hug,
Nine
person Janine
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! :)
kisses,
Janine

p.s.: thank you...
person teeta
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear color of her eyes ....

Sorry to keep you waiting for such a long time but I was really busy =_= BUT the chap will be on this weekend, and it's going to be really long! I'm on my 20th page and I think there will be at least a couple more pages to it. Sorry it's not a real review but this was the fastest way to contact you. Oh, btw, you asked me about this forum thingie, right? Well, there is a forum now, I will explain it in more detail in A/N with the chap. See you!

teeta
person Benny
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, but I'm a bit confused with the end of the chapter. So I guess that just means you'll have to update!