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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wonderful writing. I agree with kixx. The depth of Ronald's pain and loneliness is so apparent...and it gives something to the plot. Please keep up up the good work ^^...and continue with this wonderful story.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really bring across the driving force of Roland's existance, loneliness caused by fear. The fear of rejection is a crippling thing. Roland seems to have withdrawn completely yet still longs for something he won't reach out for. Excellent writing.
I hope you continue with the story. Good luck with you studies.
Kiix
I hope you continue with the story. Good luck with you studies.
Kiix