rate_review Reviews

Wow! That story had such an intresting twist to it. I love your work and can't wait to see more of your stories.

I must say "I'm hooked". Chapter 1 has may total attention.
I love Sci Fi and you've got the mind to pull a
complicated story all together.
Thanks again.
R

Very interesting story you have got going here, although to me it sounds a lot like 1984. Except without all the political mumbo jumbo and even a harsher environment where there was no old people, just dead people. One way to keep the population down I guess.

I wish you much luck on this venture and hope you update soon!

Chapter 1
From vampires to MechTech? Wow. Very interesting concept, looks like it's been plotted out with care, all the lingo:)
I can feel action coming up, I like the action/smut balance in Cake and Cinnamon, this story already seem to take in that direction, if not more intense. Good job so far.

The idea of 'retirement' made me laugh. Pretty wicked sense of humor. Will read this fic for sure.

well so far the story seems interesting.
cant wait to see were you will be taking it.