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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certainly something else. Don't take it the wrong way, I liked it. It was fresh and the psychological aspect really intrigued me.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting!!!!!!
love love it!!!!!
love love it!!!!!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thing got from bad to worse. what is this Frag???
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool!!!!! secene!!!!!!
want to read more!!!!!
want to read more!!!!!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dohn't know what to think anymore the story is becoming to complex!!!!!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that is to bad!!!! i fel a bit sorry for him!!!
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Must comment on chapter 3,
that violent sex scene curled my toes!!
I will continue reading now!
Thanks!
R
Must comment on chapter 3,
that violent sex scene curled my toes!!
I will continue reading now!
Thanks!
R
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After Chapter Five.
Great new Sci-fi universe. Convincing and interesting concepts.
Feels like a movie. (Feels like how BladeRunner felt when I first saw it.)
Eerie, futuristic, totally believable as a possible future.
Well done.
Thanks,
R
Great new Sci-fi universe. Convincing and interesting concepts.
Feels like a movie. (Feels like how BladeRunner felt when I first saw it.)
Eerie, futuristic, totally believable as a possible future.
Well done.
Thanks,
R
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Story...I was confused for a second but I got it at the end.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
I'm intrigued...
Very intrigued...
I'm intrigued...
Very intrigued...