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I have loved every word of this story and I'm so grateful that you've shared it with us. I so in love with this fic. thank you for gripping story. And please update. don't abandon this wonderful fic.

Ah, I love this take on human civilization. This is secretly how I see lots of it happening. People get taller, smarter, more beautiful. I can't quite imagine us living until we wish to die, but I think that's one of the only parts of your story which differs from my little predictions. I haven't even finished chapter two, but I'm enthralled. Wonderful work, once again.

Ah, I'm unfamiliar with how this works. I wonder, does AFF inform you that I am reviewing for Chapter Four?

And oh, how I hate coming to realizations. How sad we have become. I'm incredibly surprised that I had never found your stories before now. They are so super interesting, I can't get over it. You are very witty and original, keep it up. (:

Ah, how I love the feeling of being unable to describe my reaction to the humans' overall existence in your story. They are so blissfully unaware of the things they're missing out on that even to me it seems as though they are missing nothing at times. (: Keep it up, please.

Oh gosh, it must be really annoying that each of my comments began with 'Ah,'

Please don't judge me by that. xD

Please UPDATE!

whoa, this is so much cooler and in depth than i expected it would be! i felt some dislike toward oac at first, but now understand that, in their times, he's the one who's behaving properly, and not mc. i wonder if the creature mc saw all those years ago is still alive, and was just as affected by their encounter, meaning it'll be inevitable for a reunion to occur some day. maybe at this new planet they're heading to? it's also interesting that the lust could aggrandize to such a degree that rape is the common result for the sufferers of the "disease." what does this mean for mc when his lust has been unusually building at a slow rate?

VERY intriguing plot line and i'm really enjoying your characters!!

Very interesting, I feel really bad for this generation of humans, lol. No smex, no fun. Keep up the good work. :)

I burst out laughing when I had an inkling last chapter as to what MAR was .What does it stand for? This story reminds me of Bave New World except without the myriads of problems. I can't believe they have no females.

I love this story. But this BHJ seems to be threatening. What is a demnia? They use intials, annoying!