rate_review Reviews

this is good. hope you continue on with the story.

Yikes! Sir sounds so strict making her play fetch, then using the paddle. I bet her knees were sore too, along with her bottom. And all this was to teach her humility, eh? Well I think she’s been humbled. Your comment on the end was so mixed too. Is she really starting to hate the life she's chosen? That's interesting!

Anyway great job! And you write so well too!