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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hermosa y oscura historia, espero pronto capitulos nuevos, ana maria
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I don't know why I haven't read this sooner.
I liked it. You managed to capture your main character's POV quite well.
This is going to sound stupid, but I think her captor's language actually put me a bit off. Not because of the use of the language, but because it seems so out of character for him. But that's just me, anyway.
Good job. I think I'll keep a watch on this one.
I liked it. You managed to capture your main character's POV quite well.
This is going to sound stupid, but I think her captor's language actually put me a bit off. Not because of the use of the language, but because it seems so out of character for him. But that's just me, anyway.
Good job. I think I'll keep a watch on this one.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm....is leo gay mayhap?
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this story, though im not sure if the main character guy is lycan or vampire or some weird animal mix. please please add more raunchy sex into it i like it ;) kudos....master
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks keep it up
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I'm not the only one with the problem of the second chapter?
Damn.
That may take me a bit to figure out...
Damn.
That may take me a bit to figure out...
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like. It is an interesting story, especially since we readers don't know what this guy is yet. Waiting, somewhat patiently to find out.
Only one thing to suggest is to fix the second chapter so readers don't have to scroll across the screen to read each line.
Only one thing to suggest is to fix the second chapter so readers don't have to scroll across the screen to read each line.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Simply and utterly awesome. Update soon!