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for Mercy is a Woman

by kiix

person ArtemisEM
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sadistic. Base. Writhing.

Delicious.

This shows vampires as I like them best--immoral, immortal, but bringing forth the base humanity society likes to pretend we are above. Detailed and gripping.

I understand this is a one-shot written over five years ago, but I would be quite delighted to read more. Preferably in print.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! You were recommended to me by a friend of mine and I must say, I'm impressed!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a little sad but is wonderful!!!! she made tham pay for everything!!!!!I love it!!!!!!!
person Spirit
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me likey a lot.
A perfect one-shot in my opinion :)

~Spiritxx
person Miharaz
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol i know how you feel entirely. I did the same thing in my Grade 12 writer's craft class. I wrote a story where the main character was death and then a few other creepy tales that completely freaked my teacher out. She gave me a B in the class and started avoiding me in the halls =P

Was good and i wouldn't mind reading somemore one-shot stuff from you... particularly if the one-shots related to Xavier and the rest of the boys =D
person romanticfae
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this stories a bit diff very nice sexy powerful i like it
person twilight
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow nice really. i like this it caught my attention you should update and soon