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person cat10985
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its so good i cant wait for the next chapter.
person doloris
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No wonder why tristan is all mad? I just hope that jacy be more supportive this time. Can't wait for ch. 11. Please update soon.
person coolboy1
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYY THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
WELL FIRST OF .. im sorry that your stressed out .. hope u feel better soon !!!
i loved the chappterr-- wow tristan used to be dsylexic .. neva expected that
please can u continue frm the dinner scene .. i wna see if he tries anything on her.. when he drops her home
lol
please update sooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn
person coolboy1
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where are youuuu ??????????
u haventtt updatedd 4 us
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee PLEASSEEEEEEEEEE DO IT SOOOOONNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more for the love of hyne! More!!!! lol
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
que pasa? lol
Please update soon
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see that Jacy is gradually starting to have feelings for Tristan and is having trouble admitting them to herself, let alone him. It would have been terrible if she'd just given into him immediately after what he has put her through. The scene with them playing piano and singing together was cute. Keep up the great work.
person Velika
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Tristan keeps doing things that surprise me. I agree... a little un-intentional jealousy caused by Jacy wouldn't be bad at all, actually it would be downright interesting to see Tristan's (I believe) possessive/agressive reaction... you are doing so great! Hope to read more soon!
person cat10985
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait.. so a little confused.. did he rape her.. or was in N/C but then she caved?? i am a little confused because if so isnt he still a bad guy
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the confusion. I want to stress that it's important for you to form your own opinions, but since I don't want you to be confused, I'll clarify. It's just one of those scenarios where Jacy wasn't expecting to like the intimacy she shared with Tristan, but she ultimately does anyway. It might have been non-consensual in a way, but Tristan doesn't "rape" her (rape has to do with power, not emotions of liking or loving someone). Hope this helps a little. Thanks for the commentary though, and let me know if I'm totally out there with this explanation.