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schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEY! morrrrreeeeeee please!
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I'm loving the story and the depth to the characters, but I'm sure like a lot of readers, at the moment I hate Tristan. What he did was wrong... even if Jacy ended up enjoying it and it turned into a sort of sweet moment. He just has so much growing up to do emotionally. He needs to learn that you can't keep hurting the ones you love forever... because one day they're not going to forgive you.

I really do love the Tristan / Jacy dynamic, but I hope that Jacy gets some of her strength back when it come to Tristan. I think they both need to change a fair bit before they have a healthy, loving relationship.

I love your work and can't wait to see where the characters go from here.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT and SWEET
first time to say I love you
From the entire series this has been by far the best couple
Pleaseeeeeeeeeee UPDATE SOON
person VicRia
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love the chapter as usual! Fluffy...i want to see the next one XD
person coolboy1
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyy u updated finally
that chapter was soooo gooooodddd
tristan was a bit werid a first but i liked the power he has

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where r u? :( lol
I really can't wait to see wats going to happen between tristan and jacy after their first serious fight
hopefully he won't do anything he'll regret
person Velika
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I hated Tristan so much in this chapter. I would have left town right there if I happened to find out my boyfriend hasn't told his ex-girlfriend --who happens to be a beautiful model-- that we were dating... and that he clearly doesn't have any plans to drop the news to her soon. But then again I act way too impulsively, and thank God Jacy's not like that. And I can't find the least bit of sympathy for Krista, I still think she's trying to get something from Tristan. God, I hope you don't make her good all of the sudden. I wouldn't particularlly like it... plus, it could sound a bit cliché. But anyhow, I'll keep reading the story, I love it so much.
Update soon!

Oh, by the way, the bathroom sex scene of last chapter? HOT!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can understand both points of view over the Krista issue but I think that Tristan was wrong to get so angry with Jacy and walk out. He's got some apologising to do!! Of course she's going to have issues with him staying in contact with his lying, stick thin model ex-girlfriend. Especially when he hasn't even mentioned his new girlfriend to her. Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next.
person coolboy1
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgggg
that was such a good chaPTERRRRR
wondaaaaa what happens now between jacy n tristan
i wonda if tristan bumps into krista n they end up sleeping together coz hes so madd
loll sorry my crazy imagination
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee updateeeeeeeeeeeeee sooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW their first fight
That krista chicks sounds like a real bitch
Will krista try anything sneaky?
How are they going to make up?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON