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schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i do love tristan now, and i love the other guys too, but after that last chapter.......I REALLY LOVE RYAN!.....he's such a big squishy sweetie under all that tough guy act lol
person coolboy1
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WASSSSSSSSS AMAZINGGGGGGGG
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNNNNN
SOOO IM GUESIN THEY WILL GET BAK 2GETHA
LOL
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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person Kamille
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories but this is the one I love the most!!!! Plase Update sonn! I've always loved jacy!! she's great.. and I hope she and Tristan finally come back together.. diffrent kind of persons can stay together!! I swear!!! no one says that it is easy.. but hey.. love is in no way an easy thing!!! Kisses from Italy!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!
person VicRia
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG....They broke up? Oh i hope they go back together! Jacy shouldnt be so insecure! X( Anyway, i love chapt 20~~~~!!!!
Well Good job and please update soon!!!

~R
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww that really sucks for him i hope u update soon i wanna know whtas gunna happen with them.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! This is by far favorite. Keep up the good work.
person VicRia
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaayy! That is just so sweet of Tristan!!! XD I dont want this story to end! *clings on you* Update but dont end it soon~!^^;;
person coolboy1
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter !!!
i loved how tristan and jacys family got along toegther (even tho tristans family was better )
loved the chapter
PLEASEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNN

AND WHEN ARE THE JACYS FRIENDS GOING TO FINS OUT ABOUT TRISTAN AND HER ??
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems like most of you guys are anticipating the moment when Jacy's friends find out about her relationship with Tristan. But I'm going to break it to you...it just sort of happens in the following chapter. There isn't a moment when Ryan catches the two off in the distance enjoying a walk on the beach or anything like that. The fact that her friends find out is just sort of mentioned in passing. So, I hope you're not disappointed. The rest of the story is really good and had this story been a WIP, I definitely would've made the moment they all found out about Tristan and Jacy more memorable. Thanks much!
person Velika
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love romantic Tristan... he's every girl's dream guy. But I don't like the fact that they dropped Krista's matter so suddenly, is she going to appear again? And I don't really like Jacy's sisters.
Continue soon! Absolutely love this story!