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person Ashlynn
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww..... you are really really mean!!!!!!! cant wait till your next chapter.
person coolboy1
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving thissss
its sooo good
for some reason out of all the stories this one is the best to me
dont get me wrong i love all the others. but this one seems to connect to me


loving your work please update again soon
and again u r a star!!!!!!!!!!!!! for allways geting us a chapter everyday
thank you
please continue your FINE work

xxx
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've followed all the Boys and Girls Series and Jacy has always been my favorite charecter because she is very like me, now more like me than I thought! this story has really grabbed my attention as Me and my boyfriend used to fight like cat and dog for years before we got together being rivals in horse riding, job oppertunities and fencing. I'm only 5'7 and admittedly though in good shape, not the skiniest girl in the world and him handsom and athletic and... gorgeous. He and I got together at a fencing tourniment after I beat him in the finals and he came over to tell me I must have cheated. we've been together now for nearly 3 years and I hope Jacy doesnt have as hard a time as I did!

Keep up the great work!
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that story! That's so romantic! You're very, very lucky. Sigh...
person Ashlynn
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes!!!!! they finally meet. it is so hot.looking forward to more. update soon.
person coolboy1
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loveeee this storyyy n its only jus started kind of lol
please please update


U NO UR SUCH A STAR!!!
YOU ALWAYZ MANAGE 2 GET US A NEW CHAPPY EVERY DAYY
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!


XXXX
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Before I say anything: I have read your 3 previous stories in this series and love them all ^_^
While this is by far my LEAST favorite pairing of characters you've done, I think it's also been
the MOST interesting so far. I'm sure i'll get used to the idea of headstrong Jacy and asshole-turned-human
Tristan being together. Keep up the great work and update soon please ^^
--Radgar
person coolboy1
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i AM LOVING THIS SOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEEE
person Ashlynn
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so good so far. but can't wait till the first real meeting between jacy and tristen. looking forward to it. keep it up.
person Ashlynn
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally a story about jacy. it is good to know that tristen is turning into a new leaf. but i do hope that one day, he would walk up to jacy and apologize to her personally. cant wait to see the next chapter. looking forward to it.