rate_review Reviews

Wow, I really liked this story. It was short but cute. Made me feel all good inside at the end.

THE END.O_O Oh no, can we PLEASE get another chapter that was so good.I really would have liked to read about them actually making upstairs to the. . .er bedroom, bathroom, shoot I would have settled for the hallway. Well anyway if that is the end you might want to add the fact that this is a oneshot to the synopsis so that readers don't expect more. Kudus for the good work.