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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol I really thought it was cute. In a smexy sort of way. :D
I enjoyed the third person POV, though I think I noticed one slip up somewhere in the story. It was also interesting to know what Shawn was thinking. He's a perv, really. >.> But a sexy one. Heh.
I realllllly want to know how the two become so comfortable with each other, though. o.O
I enjoyed the third person POV, though I think I noticed one slip up somewhere in the story. It was also interesting to know what Shawn was thinking. He's a perv, really. >.> But a sexy one. Heh.
I realllllly want to know how the two become so comfortable with each other, though. o.O
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ that's all i needed to love these boys even more.
Uri's insecurities have been so cruel to him thus far in the main story that i've been questioning how it will end. but now i'm re-assured & i got some pretty smexings too. ^_^
Uri's insecurities have been so cruel to him thus far in the main story that i've been questioning how it will end. but now i'm re-assured & i got some pretty smexings too. ^_^
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was hot! Looking forward to the two of them finally getting together. How could you not want this, Uri?! ;o)
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Teeta, this story is so hot. I mean I was all hot and bothered by the end of the story. Great job. Keep up the great writing.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved how you put it together Teeta! I had fun with Role play, really did, and I was soo scared that I'd suck at being Shawn but I guess I did ok. ^_^ And see how well you can write smut! I remember how hesitant you were about it just some months ago. You rock! *hugs*
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh my God. This was so awesome. I was grinning like an idiot from the moment I saw the summary to the very end.
It was extremely adorable and sexy all at once. Are you sure you aren't used to writing smut? Because you rock at it.
I loved seeing the dynamic of Shawn and Uri's relationship once it's established. Uri is just so relaxed and laid back, but still definitely Uri. I'm glad this will obviously benefit him that way.
I wasn't expecting Uri to ever really do anything dominant, but it works really well. And I love how Shawn calls him a "fox".
This made my day. Thank you thank you thank you!
It was extremely adorable and sexy all at once. Are you sure you aren't used to writing smut? Because you rock at it.
I loved seeing the dynamic of Shawn and Uri's relationship once it's established. Uri is just so relaxed and laid back, but still definitely Uri. I'm glad this will obviously benefit him that way.
I wasn't expecting Uri to ever really do anything dominant, but it works really well. And I love how Shawn calls him a "fox".
This made my day. Thank you thank you thank you!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised and delighted by this story !
Hot writting !! ;P
Hot writting !! ;P
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...ghhh... woooow. O_O
...minutes later... Now that I have some coherent thoughts I have to tell you what you wrote a wonderfull PVP!
I loved it and drooled all over the screen. Uri was so dominant, and I loved the way he could gain control over Shawn. Now I really really really want to know how Not Supposed To will continue. I never want it to end!!!
They are so pretty togother, but I would love to see their firsts too, their first kiss and so on. Oh I cant tell you how this story makes me feel. I'm in love with it. Tonight I'll translate it to my roommate and I'll tell you what she thought tomorrow.
Untile then lots og hugs for you and for your muse for the good work you did.
love:edevis
...minutes later... Now that I have some coherent thoughts I have to tell you what you wrote a wonderfull PVP!
I loved it and drooled all over the screen. Uri was so dominant, and I loved the way he could gain control over Shawn. Now I really really really want to know how Not Supposed To will continue. I never want it to end!!!
They are so pretty togother, but I would love to see their firsts too, their first kiss and so on. Oh I cant tell you how this story makes me feel. I'm in love with it. Tonight I'll translate it to my roommate and I'll tell you what she thought tomorrow.
Untile then lots og hugs for you and for your muse for the good work you did.
love:edevis
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there,
that was freaking hot - took me some tissues while reading this (for the nosebleed of course...)! You've got to love a dominant Uri!
So long
Nathaniel
that was freaking hot - took me some tissues while reading this (for the nosebleed of course...)! You've got to love a dominant Uri!
So long
Nathaniel
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh look. I'm reviewing again. The things that I do for you.
And, of course, the things you do for me. I lvoe that bet now, even if I didn't win. I still got my prize. It was win/win for both of us!
Defentely wasn't what I expected, since you totally almost switched the roles on me, but it was still hawt. <3 Your other readers should thank me for asking for a smut story as a reward. Yay for blindfolds and public places~!
And, of course, the things you do for me. I lvoe that bet now, even if I didn't win. I still got my prize. It was win/win for both of us!
Defentely wasn't what I expected, since you totally almost switched the roles on me, but it was still hawt. <3 Your other readers should thank me for asking for a smut story as a reward. Yay for blindfolds and public places~!