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Oh... my god, that was so hot teeta! *wipes brow* What I love about your writing is that you take everything slowly--the details were so nicely drawn out and not rushed that it was just plain beautiful (made me blush while reading)! I'm more eager than ever to finally see these two get together, if only for the sake of knowing that these kinds of actions are in their future. :P It would have been funny, though, if at the end it was revealed that the granny wasn't as deaf as Shawn thought she was. XD It would have been so hilarious if someone had heard them goin' at it. LOL Again, I love you and your marvellous stories, teeta; great job! *huggle*

~Endless

loved it!!!!!! hahaha ~~im such a perve... XD

Yay! Smut! :is very very happy: (I've been reading this for a while and, unfortunatly, have only just barely gotten around to commenting *bows in apology*)

Know what other sub story I'd love? The story from Shawn's POV. *evil grin*

Very, very well done. As you write more, your wrting gets better. Now then, if you don't mind, would you please get them together in the main story now? Please?

My long awaited SMEX scene! YES... at long last...I think the torture of waiting for it was just as bad as Shawn`s was when Uri was teasing him.

Man oh man...man on man action and plenty of it. With a little kinkiness thrown in to give it flavor...no pun intended LOL Thank God I finally got my hands.. eyes.. on a long, detailed, explicit sex scene between the two... it would have been even more awesome with more than hand job but I won`t complain. It too you this long to give us this.

And it would be great if the story ended in such a way as to make it possible to insert this as a sequel or one last chapter of their happy life.

God Damn! GOOD scene! XD *wipes drool*

I was not expecticing this...and I must say. You have surprised once again with your enduring talents. ^_^ I loved it. I must admit....I was hesitente t oread thi, because I didn't want to ruin the ending for 'Not supposed to' But you know that curiosity killed the cat...-Meow- ^_^ I am really glad that I did take that wonderful leap to read this, you have taken my breath away and have me begging for more. It makes me anxious for another of your 'Not supposed to' chapters. The HJ and BJ were...entertaining. Very Original. Perfect for how Shawn and Uri truly are. I give you submissive licks and passive kisses for strength. ^_^

Dayakara~

Soo good, LOL Shawn is pretty cheeky, great to know things are going to turn out good for them!

loved it.
sooo hot
the kinkyness
the fear of getting caught
a blindfold?
hella hot!
lol

hehe.
loved it

Now that's what I'm talking about! We got to get these two together in the full length story...I'm inspired! Off to write some LOTR smut! Thanks HON! Great PWP..no worries there.

Holy shit. Uri teasing Shawn is so sexy. So, so, so sexy. Gawd. Naughty Uri. It's nice to see that there IS hope for their relationship. Which makes me very, very happy. This reminds me of the time that I saw a guy sucking another guy off in Finding Nemo. Lmfao. I was with my cousin so I was like, "Fuck. That's hot but...omgomgomg. Cover Rina's eyes!!" She was 8. But I don't think she could see them. She was focusing on the movie too much and they were a little bit down the row. I remember I told my friend and he said, "Well, I guess he found his Nemo." Anyway, Shawn is a devil. You should just change his name to Mastermind. He's a deviant genius with mastermind qualities and manipulation equipped. So sexy.